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Band 6+: The diorama shows the number of men and women having a job in South Korea in 2020.

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The image presents a bar graph comparing the number of men and women employed in various professions in South Korea in 2020. For teachers, men total 4 and women 2; doctors show men at 1, women at 6; police workers have 5 men, 3 women; economists have 3 men, 1 woman; office workers include 4 men, 4 women.
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The chart illustrates the figure for occupations (teacher, doctor, police worker, economist, and office worker) for men and women in South Korea in 2020. Overall, the number of men exceed that of women and the job with the most significant difference between genders was doctor. Police worker was the most popular job for men, while the majority of women preferred doctor.

There were three jobs in which men worked more than women. Regarding teacher, the number of women accounted for 4 million, which was a million lower than that of men. When it comes to police worker, the figure for men was 5 million while women accounted for a million less. In terms of economist, the number of men worked more than women (around 3 million).

On the other hand, with regards to doctor, the figure for men was a million, while women accounted for 5 million more. Concerning office worker, the numbers of men and women were the same, at 4 million.

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Overall Band Score

6.5
(+/- 0.5)
Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A
Vocabulary Repetition:
women: 9
million: 7
worker: 4
figure: 3
doctor: 3
police: 3
number: 3
while: 3
accounted: 3
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Task Response

7
The report accurately reflects the data presented in the diorama. Minor inaccuracies in the numbers do not detract from the overall understanding of the data.

Coherence & Cohesion

6
The report is generally well-organized and easy to follow. However, a few grammatical errors and inconsistencies affect the flow and clarity in places.

Lexical Resource

6.5
The report demonstrates a good range of vocabulary, although some word choices could be more precise and natural. Pay attention to vocabulary repetition to improve the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

6
While the report uses a variety of grammatical structures, several errors affect the overall accuracy and fluency.

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