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Band 5+: The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use.

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The image depicts two pie charts showing Australian household energy use and greenhouse gas emissions. The energy use chart shows heating at 42%, water heating at 30%, other appliances at 15%, refrigeration at 7%, lighting at 4%, and cooling at 2%. The greenhouse gas emissions chart shows water heating at 32%, other appliances at 28%, heating at 15%, refrigeration at 14%, lighting at 8%, and cooling at 3%.

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The first pie chart illustrates the consumption of energy in an Australian household while the other one shows the emittion of harmful gases as a result of it.

Overall, it is clear that heating takes the highest energy use, but water heating causes nearly one third of gas emissions.

42% of energy is emitted due to heating, which is 12% more than that of water heating. By conrast, the figure for other appliances is just 15% and the rest, including refigiration, lightning and cooling, at 7%, 4% and 2%, respectively.

Water heating is responsible for the nearly one third of gas emission, while the energy consumption for cooling is 3%. Lightning, refirigeration and other appliances produce as twice less energy as they emit gases. Meanwhile, heating just accounts for 15% of gas emissions.

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The report adequately addresses the task, but there are some minor lapses in content. The writer could have provided more detailed comparisons and analysis of the data. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

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The report is generally easy to follow, but there are some minor issues with cohesion. The writer could have used more cohesive devices to link the sentences and paragraphs.

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The writer uses a range of vocabulary, but there are some minor errors and inaccuracies. The use of 'emittion' instead of 'emission' and 'lightning' instead of 'lighting' detracts from the overall quality of the report.

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The writer demonstrates a good range of sentence structures, but there are some minor errors in grammar and punctuation. For example, '42% of energy is emitted due to heating' should be 'Heating accounts for 42% of energy use'.

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Band 5+: The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use.

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The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use.

The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use.

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