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Band 6+: The following two pie charts display the results of a survey into the popularity of various leisure activities among European adults in 1985 and 1995. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 word

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The image displays two pie charts on the leisure activities of European adults. For 1985, the percentages were: watching TV 32%, eating out 23%, talking with friends 21%, talking with family 18%, and other 6%. For 1995, the percentages were: watching TV 30%, playing computer games 27%, talking with friends 26%, eating out 8%, talking with family 7%, and other 2%.

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The provided pie charts presents a comparison of the survey results of popular activities, which European adults do on their freetime during 1985 and 1995.

Overall, it is immediately noticed that during both year watching TV is higher than other activities, while others activities is the least of popularity. Moreover, European adults started to enjoyed computer games during their freetime in 1995.

Watching TV was the most popular activities during both 1985 and 1995, which had a slightly declined of number (32% and 30% repectively), but still the most popular. In term of playing computer games, at 27%, which over took eating out in 1985 by 4%, that made it the second place. However, playing computer games hadn’t appeared until 1995. Followed by talking with friends in 1995 accounted for 26% , In 1985, the third place was talking with friends, at 21%. Regarding talking with family, its experienced decrease in popularity by 11%. The least popular activities during both year is other activities.

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activities: 6

during: 5

popular: 4

which: 3

computer: 3

games: 3

talking: 3

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Task Response

The report adequately covers the main features of the charts, including the overall trend, the dominance of watching TV, the emergence of computer games, and comparisons between the two years. However, there are some omissions and inaccuracies, such as not mentioning the exact percentage for eating out in 1995 and incorrectly stating that computer games overtook eating out in 1985 (when computer games did not exist in 1985). The report could be improved by providing a clearer structure, using more precise data, and ensuring grammatical accuracy.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a logical structure with an introduction, an overview, and body paragraphs, but the flow is sometimes disrupted by awkward phrasing and unclear referencing. For example, the sentence 'In term of playing computer games, at 27%, which over took eating out in 1985 by 4%, that made it the second place' is confusing and could be rephrased for clarity. Additionally, the comparison between years is not always clearly signaled, and the use of cohesive devices is inconsistent. To improve, use clearer topic sentences and ensure each paragraph focuses on a specific comparison or trend, with smooth transitions between ideas.

Lexical Resource

The report uses a reasonable range of vocabulary related to the task (e.g., 'popularity', 'declined', 'accounted for'), but there are several inaccuracies and awkward expressions, such as 'freetime' (should be 'free time'), 'over took' (should be 'overtook'), and 'its experienced' (should be 'it experienced'). The phrasing 'the least of popularity' is unnatural; 'the least popular' would be better. To improve, focus on using precise and natural collocations, and avoid literal translations. Also, vary the vocabulary used to describe trends (e.g., 'decline', 'increase', 'remain stable') and ensure correct word forms.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains a number of grammatical errors that affect clarity and accuracy. For example, 'The provided pie charts presents' should be 'The provided pie charts present' (subject-verb agreement), and 'during both year' should be 'during both years'. There are also issues with articles ('the most popular activities' should be 'the most popular activity'), prepositions ('declined of number' should be 'declined in number'), and sentence structure (e.g., 'which over took eating out in 1985 by 4%' is unclear). The range of grammatical structures is limited, with many simple sentences and some fragments. To improve, practice using a variety of complex structures (e.g., relative clauses, conditionals) and proofread for subject-verb agreement, tense consistency, and correct use of articles and prepositions.

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