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The image features four pie charts displaying travel purposes to the UK through airports in 2016. Gatwick Airport: Holiday 54%, Business 14%, Visiting friends/family 30%, Other 2%. Heathrow Airport: Holiday 35%, Business 27%, Visiting friends/family 26%, Other 12%. Luton Airport: Holiday 52%, Business 16%, Visiting friends/family 35%, Other 3%. Stansted Airport: Holiday 49%, Business 10%, Visiting friends/family 40%, Other 1%.

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The four pie charts illustrate the key information about traveling to th UK via different airports in 2016, the unit are measured in percentages.

Overall, it is clear from the graph that are four Airport, there are Gatwick Airport, Heathrow Airport, Luton Airport, and Stansted Airport .Luton Airport have the higher amount of visiting frindes/family whereas Heathrow Airport have the large number in Business, Gatwick Airport got high number on holiday.

Gatwick Airport ,54% of people go in Gatwick Airport for holiday and 30% for visiting frindes/family,whereas 34% for business and 2% for other things.However,in Heathrow Airport 36% visiting frindes/family which is the higher one , 32% for holiday, 27% for business,and 4% to others.

Luton Airport, 50% people traveling in Luton Airport due to visiting frindes or family,35% for holidays,13 for business, and 2% for others, moving to Stansted Airport, have 48% visiting frindes/family, 36% for holidays, 14% business, and 2% to others.

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airport: 14

visiting: 5

business: 4

gatwick: 3

heathrow: 3

luton: 3

frindes/family: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the task, but there are inaccuracies in the data reported and some issues with the organization and clarity. To improve, focus on accurately representing the data from the charts and ensure a clear, logical structure with distinct paragraphs for each airport or a comparison of the airports.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report lacks a clear structure and logical flow. The overview is weak, and the body paragraphs lack clear topic sentences and transitions. Information is presented in a somewhat disorganized manner, making it difficult for the reader to follow the key trends and comparisons. Paragraphing needs improvement to better group related information. Consider starting each paragraph with a clear topic sentence that introduces the main point of that paragraph. Use transition words and phrases to connect ideas within and between paragraphs.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is basic and repetitive. There is limited use of more sophisticated language to describe the data. The report relies on simple words and phrases, which restricts the depth of analysis. Expand your vocabulary related to describing data and trends. Use synonyms and varied language to avoid repetition. For example, instead of always saying 'high number,' try 'significant proportion,' 'substantial percentage,' or 'major share.'

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The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and incorrect use of articles and prepositions. Sentence structure is often awkward and unclear. These errors significantly impede understanding. Focus on improving your understanding of basic grammar rules. Practice writing simple sentences correctly before attempting more complex structures. Proofread carefully for errors in verb tense, subject-verb agreement, and article usage. Consider using a grammar checker to identify and correct errors.

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