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Band 6+: The charts below show the main sources of funding for wildlife conservation in Africa and South America for the years 2010 and 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image features two bar charts detailing wildlife conservation funding in millions of US dollars across four sources in 2010 and 2020, with x-axes labeled 'Funding Source' ('Government Grants', 'Private Donations', 'Corporate Sponsorships', 'Tourism Revenue') and y-axes labeled 'Funding (Millions of US Dollars)' with a legend for 2010 and 2020. The top chart, titled 'Wildlife Conservation Funding in Africa (2010 & 2020)' with y-axis ticks from 0 to 140 in increments of 20, lists values for 2010 and 2020 respectively as: Government Grants at 120 and 140; Private Donations at 80 and 110; Corporate Sponsorships at 40 and 50; and Tourism Revenue at 150 and 90. The bottom chart, titled 'Wildlife Conservation Funding in South America (2010 & 2020)' with y-axis ticks from 0 to 120 in increments of 20, lists values for 2010 and 2020 respectively as: Government Grants at 90 and 130; Private Donations at 60 and 80; Corporate Sponsorships at 70 and 90; and Tourism Revenue at 50 and 60.

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The barcharts display primary funding sources for wildlife conservation in Africa and South America in two different years, particularly, 2010 and 2020.

Overall, the fundings from different sources have risen in the span of 10 years in both Africa and South America, with Tourism Revenue in Africa being an exception.

In Africa, government grands in conserving wildlife have increased from 120 million USD to 140 million USD in 2020. Private donations have caused the funds to rise from around 80 million USD to around 120 million USD in the year 2020. Corporate sponsorships have contributed the least among the four mentioned sources, In 2010, the fundings were around 40 million USD. In 2020, this funding could not even reach 60 million USD. In case of South America, the fundings have increased over the years.

The largest source of fundings across South America and Africa remain government grants. However, fundings in tourism profit have decreased for Africa over 10 years, but have increased for South America.

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south: 5

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Task Response

The report effectively addresses the task by providing an overview and describing key trends in the data. It correctly identifies the overall increase in funding across most sources and highlights the notable exception of tourism revenue in Africa. The report also makes relevant comparisons between the two regions. However, there are a few minor inaccuracies and omissions: the figure for private donations in Africa in 2020 is stated as 'around 120 million' instead of 110 million, and the report does not mention the specific values for South America's government grants, private donations, corporate sponsorships, and tourism revenue. To improve, ensure all key data points are accurately reported and include specific figures for both regions to fully satisfy the task requirements.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a clear overall structure with an introduction, overview, and body paragraphs. However, the flow is sometimes disrupted by abrupt transitions and incomplete comparisons. For example, the paragraph on South America is underdeveloped and lacks specific data. To improve, ensure each paragraph focuses on a clear main idea and use cohesive devices to link ideas smoothly. Additionally, the overview could be more precise, and the conclusion could be strengthened by summarizing key trends more effectively.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate but not always precise or varied. Words like 'fundings' and 'grands' are incorrect (should be 'funding' and 'grants'). There is some repetition of 'fundings' and 'increased'. To improve, use a wider range of synonyms (e.g., 'financial support', 'contributions', 'rose', 'grew') and ensure correct word forms. Also, avoid informal phrases like 'could not even reach' in academic writing.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates a reasonable range of sentence structures, but there are several grammatical errors and awkward phrasings that affect clarity. Examples include 'The barcharts display' (should be 'The bar charts display'), 'in the span of 10 years' (should be 'over a 10-year period'), and 'In case of South America' (should be 'In the case of South America'). Punctuation issues, such as missing commas, also appear. To improve, proofread carefully and practice using a variety of complex sentences with accurate grammar.

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