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Band 4+: The graph above show rice production in four Asian countries in 1985 and 2005

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The image shows two pie charts depicting rice production in four Asian countries, China, Korea, Japan, and Vietnam, for 1985 and 2005. In 1985, China produced 50%, Korea 15%, Japan 30%, and Vietnam 5%. In 2005, China increased to 60%, Korea declined to 10%, Japan reduced to 25%, and Vietnam increased to 5%.

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The charts present data of four Asian countries ( China, Korea,Japan, and Vietnam) that provide rice between 1985 and 2005.

Overall, Japan rice production has increased significantly, standing at first place. Meanwhile China and Vietnam have declined through the year with Korea producing at the lowest compared to the other three countries.

In 1985, China and Vietnam take over almost half of the rice production with Japan at top three and Korea produces rice the lowest. Despite that, Japan has try to increase their rice production and becoming highest country that produces rice in 2005. However China and Vietnam start to produce less and decrease a quarter. Meanwhile Korea rapidly decrease their production of rice until 2005.

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Overall Band Score

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

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china: 4

production: 4

japan: 3

vietnam: 3

korea: 3

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Task Response

The report identifies the main trends but contains inaccuracies regarding the data. For example, it states that Japan's rice production increased significantly and stood in first place, which is incorrect according to the provided data. Also, the report mentions that China and Vietnam have declined, but the data shows that China increased and Vietnam remained the same. To improve, ensure that the data cited is accurate and reflects the information presented in the charts. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report's organization is somewhat unclear. The overview is not very insightful and contains inaccuracies. The body paragraphs lack clear topic sentences and transitions, making it difficult to follow the comparisons between the countries and years. To improve coherence, ensure each paragraph focuses on a specific aspect or comparison, and use transition words to link ideas smoothly.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate but could be more precise. There are instances of imprecise word choice (e.g., "take over almost half," "try to increase"). To enhance lexical resource, use more specific and varied vocabulary related to production and changes over time (e.g., "accounted for," "strove to increase," "experienced a decline").

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity. Examples include incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and awkward phrasing. To improve grammatical accuracy, carefully proofread for errors and focus on using a wider range of sentence structures correctly. Pay attention to verb tense consistency and correct article usage.

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