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Band 4+: The graph below describes the use of fixed telephone lines, mobile phones, and internet between 1994 and 2005 in China. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image displays a line graph showing the number of people (in millions) using three different communication methods from 1994 to 2005. For Fixed telephone lines, the user numbers were: 1994 (20), 1995 (50), 1996 (80), 1997 (120), 1998 (150), 1999 (175), 2000 (200), 2001 (250), 2002 (275), 2003 (300), 2004 (320), and 2005 (350). For Mobile phones, the numbers started in 1996 at 25, followed by: 1997 (50), 1998 (115), 1999 (140), 2000 (165), 2001 (250), 2002 (300), 2003 (350), 2004 (400), and 2005 (450). For the Internet, the data began in 1995 at 5, and continued as: 1996 (10), 1997 (50), 1998 (75), 1999 (100), 2000 (110), 2001 (125), 2002 (150), 2003 (160), 2004 (170), and 2005 (185).

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The line graph shows the use telephone, phone and internet between 1994 and 1995 in China.Overall, mobile phones increased significantly and show the highest figure in 2005.Fixed telephone line did not increase noticable but sshow the average number in 2005.Internet did not increase in 1994 and 1996 but then increased slowly.In 2005 internet show the lowest figure.

In 1995 mobile phone increased from 0 to 50 and then did not stop increasing.Mobile phone show the highest figure in 2005. Phone increased significantly from 175 to 250 in 2001.Mobile phone did not show the low figure in 1994 and 2005.Before mobile phone did not increase significantly but then icreased noticeable in over the period.In 1996 mobile phone increased from 50 to 75.This figure is the lowest result in mobile phone.

Fixed telephones increased 25 to 50 in 1994 and 1995.Fixed telephone increased to 25 in all years.Fixed telephone increased from 25 to 350.Internet did not ncrease in 1994, 1995 and 1996.Then increased significantly from 0 to 50.In 2005 internet show the highest number.

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increased: 9

phone: 7

mobile: 5

telephone: 4

significantly: 4

figure: 4

internet: 3

highest: 3

increase: 3

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Task Response

The report attempts to address the task but contains significant inaccuracies and omissions. The time period is incorrectly stated as 1994-1995 instead of 1994-2005, and the data for each communication method is largely misreported or vague. Key trends are not clearly identified, and the report lacks a coherent overview. To improve, focus on accurately describing the main trends, using correct data, and providing a clear summary of the overall changes.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report lacks a clear overall structure and logical progression. The introduction is incomplete and the overview is vague. The body paragraphs are not clearly organized by category or time period, and the ideas are presented in a somewhat random order. Cohesive devices are used sparingly and often inaccurately, making the text difficult to follow. To improve, plan the report with a clear introduction, an overview paragraph, and body paragraphs that each focus on one communication method, using appropriate linking words to show contrast and trend.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is limited and repetitive, with frequent misuse of words (e.g., 'show' instead of 'shows', 'noticable' instead of 'noticeable', 'icreased' instead of 'increased'). There is little variety in the language used to describe trends, and the report lacks the precise terminology expected for this task (e.g., 'peaked', 'remained stable', 'overtook'). To improve, expand your range of trend vocabulary and ensure correct word forms and collocations. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including subject-verb agreement (e.g., 'mobile phone show'), incorrect verb tenses, and missing articles. Sentence structures are mostly simple and repetitive, with limited use of complex sentences. Punctuation is also problematic, with missing commas and periods. To improve, practice using a variety of sentence structures, ensure subject-verb agreement, and proofread for basic grammar and punctuation errors.

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