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Band 5+: The graph below gives information about international tourist arrivals in five countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisions where relevant.

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The image displays a line graph of international tourist arrivals in millions from 1995 to 2010 across five countries: Brazil, Egypt, Malaysia, France, and USA. In 1995, Brazil had approximately 10 million, Egypt 5 million, Malaysia 25 million, France 60 million, USA 70 million. In 2000, Brazil reached nearly 15 million, Egypt 7 million, Malaysia 40 million, France 75 million, USA 70 million. By 2005, Brazil was nearly 25 million, Egypt 8 million, Malaysia 55 million, France 75 million, USA 80 million. In 2010, Brazil recorded around 45 million, Egypt 15 million, Malaysia 60 million, France 85 million, USA slightly above 90 million.

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The line graph illustrates data about worldwide traveller arrivals in the USA, France, Malaysia, Brazil and Egypt from 1995 to 2010.

Overall, according to the given chart, it is evidient that, the USA record the highest number of arrivals , while, Brazil experience the lowest by 2010.

The USA holding the top positions from starting to ending the total 15 years period where France also completed the total run as a joining top contributor which was approximately 85 millions of international tourist arrival. In 1995, France was started from nearly 30 millions and then a significant rise every five years period while, the USA was almost constant over the period.

Egypt and Brazil was experience the almost constant in all 3 terms, where they both are starts from under the 10 millions at the beginning year and completed with almost 15 and 12 millions consequtively. Malaysia starts from just top of 20 millions and till 2005 from 1995 remain constant and then dramatically rise in last 5 years period but it still stay on the middle position.

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Task Response

The report addresses the task by describing the main trends and making some comparisons, but it contains several inaccuracies and omissions. For instance, the starting value for France is incorrectly stated as 30 million instead of 60 million, and the final values for Brazil and Egypt are not accurately reported. Additionally, the description of Malaysia's trend is inaccurate, as it actually increased steadily rather than remaining constant until 2005. The report also lacks a clear overview of the overall trends and could benefit from more precise data and a more structured comparison. To improve, ensure that all key figures are correctly reported and that the summary highlights the most significant changes and contrasts between countries.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a clear overall structure with an introduction and an overview, but the flow of ideas is often disrupted by awkward phrasing and unclear referencing. The paragraphs are not logically organized, and the progression from one country to another is not smooth. To improve, use clear topic sentences for each paragraph and ensure that each paragraph focuses on a specific set of comparisons or time periods. Additionally, use cohesive devices (e.g., 'in contrast', 'similarly') to link ideas more effectively.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate for the task, but there are several inaccuracies and limited range. Words like 'evidient' (misspelled), 'consequtively' (misspelled), and phrases like 'holding the top positions' and 'joining top contributor' are not natural or precise. To improve, use a wider range of precise vocabulary related to trends (e.g., 'peaked', 'remained stable', 'experienced a dramatic increase') and ensure correct spelling and word choice. Avoid informal or awkward expressions.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including subject-verb agreement ('Brazil experience', 'Egypt and Brazil was'), incorrect verb forms ('The USA holding', 'France was started'), and punctuation issues (e.g., missing commas, incorrect use of commas). These errors significantly affect clarity and readability. To improve, practice using a variety of sentence structures (e.g., complex sentences with subordinate clauses) and review basic grammar rules, especially verb tenses and subject-verb agreement. Proofread the report to eliminate errors.

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