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Band 6+: THE graph below gives information on the numbers of participants for different acitivities at one social centre in Melbourne, Australia for the period 2000 to 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

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The image shows numerical data points of participants in five activities from 2000 to 2020: Film Club 0-60, 50, 47; Martial Art 5, 10, 16; Amateur Dramatics 10-50, 20-55; Table Tennis 35-45, 25, 10, Cricket 0-20, 12-18, 5. Detailed trends: Film Club stable at 40-60; Martial Art rising from 5 to 15-20 in 2010, slight decline then rising 20 in 2020; Amateur Dramatics steady at 10-40 until rapid rise post-2017; Table Tennis steady about 10-40, peak in early years then fall, stabilize around 20; Cricket fluctuates around 10-20, peaking at 15-20 2016-2020.
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The given line graph illustrates how many people took part in 5 different genres of activities at a social centre in Melbourne, Australia throughout the period 2000 to 2020. It can be seen that Table Tennis, Amateur Dramatics, and Musical Performances had some significant changes whereas Film Club and Martial Art hadn’t change so much from 2000 to 2020. It is clearly that Film Club has the most figures for participants over the period.

From 2000 to 2005, these activities hadn’t change much. Musical Performances started at 0 participants and continued this figure to 2005. Film and Martial Art had an slight decrease while Amateur Dramatics and Table Tennis were increasing at this time.

From 2005 to 2020, there were various changes in the figures. Amateur Dramatics rapidly declined from 28 participants to just 5 in 2020. Musical Performances, from 0 participant, rose to around 19 participants in 2020, approximately with Table Tennis in 2005. Table Tennis remained stable to 2010 before sharply increased to about 53 participants, becoming the second activity that had the most participants in 2020. However, Martial Art just fluctuated around 35 participants throughout the period.After all, Film Club remained at the activity that had the most participants among the 5 activities.

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Overall Band Score

6
(+/- 0.5)
Vocabulary Complexity:
C1 - Intricate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A
Vocabulary Repetition:
participants: 8
table: 4
tennis: 4
activities: 3
amateur: 3
dramatics: 3
musical: 3
performances: 3
martial: 3
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Task Response

6
The report identifies some main features but includes inaccuracies and some irrelevant details. The description of trends is not always precise, and there are errors in the data reported. To improve, focus on accurately representing the data and ensuring all reported information is relevant and appropriately detailed.

Coherence & Cohesion

6
The report demonstrates an adequate attempt to organize information, but the flow could be improved. The introduction provides a general overview, but the subsequent paragraphs lack clear transitions and connections between ideas. The organization of details within paragraphs could also be more logical. For example, grouping activities with similar trends together would enhance coherence. Consider using transition words and phrases to link ideas and improve the overall flow of the report.

Lexical Resource

6
The report uses a satisfactory range of vocabulary, but there are instances where more precise or varied language could be used. The vocabulary is generally appropriate for the task, but there is room for improvement in terms of sophistication and accuracy. For example, instead of repeatedly using "change," consider using synonyms like "fluctuate," "increase," or "decrease" to add variety and precision. Also, ensure that the vocabulary used accurately reflects the data presented in the graph.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

6
The report demonstrates a reasonable command of grammar, but there are noticeable errors that affect clarity. While the overall meaning is generally clear, the presence of grammatical errors and awkward phrasing detracts from the report's overall quality. Focus on improving sentence structure, subject-verb agreement, and the correct use of articles and prepositions. Proofreading carefully for errors before submitting the report can help improve grammatical accuracy.

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