🔥 Today Only: Save 30% on Premium — Offer Ends Soon! - Upgrade Now!
Line Graph

Band 5+: the graph below gives infromation on the numbers of participants for different activities at one social center in Melbourne, Australia for the period 2000 to 2020

Image for topic: the graph below gives infromation on the numbers of participants for different activities at one social center in Melbourne, Australia for the period 2000 to 2020
Our system will evaluate the answer based on this AI-generated description.
The image displays a line graph showing participant numbers for various activities from 2000 to 2020: Film club begins at 15 participants in 2000, increases above 30 in 2005, reaches 50 in 2010, nears 70 in 2015, and tops at 80 by 2020; Martial arts starts around 50 in 2000, steady until 2005, oscillates between 45-50 until 2015, and rests just above 50 in 2020; Amateur dramatics starts high at 60 in 2000, falls slightly below 60 in 2005, maintains just above 50 in 2010, eases towards 50 by 2015, and rises slightly above 60 in 2020; Table tennis is approximately 30 in 2000, shows minor fluctuations, remains steady around 32 by 2005, dips slightly above 20 until 2015, and exceeds 30 nearing 2020; Musical performances start slightly above 20 in 2000, climbs to 40 by 2005, holds around 45 until 2010, soars above 60 in 2015, and peaks just above 70 by 2020.
Given the complexity of the image, the above description may not be entirely accurate.
Skyrocket your IELTS band score by 1-2 points in under a month with our premium plan!
Check it out
Note: Both the topic and the answer were created by one of our users.

The graph represents the number of people took part in various number of activities at center for social which happened between 2000 and 2020 in Melbourne, Australia.

Overall, among the five activities clearly film club is the most popular among the participants & musical performances & amateur dramatics are the least. While film club & martial arts show steady trends overall but other three fluctuate over the period.

The number of persons partaking in film club varies from 60 to 70 over the years of 2002 to 2020 with the highest number in 2020. Martial arts also projects similar trends keeping the participation from 30 to 40.

The most rapid growth can be seen in participating in musical performances as the no was zero from 2000 to 2005 then increased as the years passed by reaching just below 20 in 2020. For table tennis there in upward trend after 2010, reaching astronomically just around 60 at the end of 2020. Martial arts participation numbers are in decline after 2005 and is the least among 5 activities after 2020. So participation among the people at the social center increased for film club, table tennis, martial arts 7 musical performances is increasing on the other hand amateur dramatics has seen a decline.

Word Count: 210

Check Your Answer On This Topic?

Check My Answer

Generate A Band-9 Sample Answer?

Generate A Sample

Overall Band Score

5.5
(+/- 0.5)
Vocabulary Complexity:
C1 - Intricate
Strive to incorporate even richer and more precise language.
Grammar Mistakes: N/A
Vocabulary Repetition:
number: 4
among: 4
martial: 4
activities: 3
&: 3
musical: 3
performances: 3
participation: 3
after: 3
Try using synonyms for the above words

Task Response

6
The report addresses the task but contains some inaccuracies and omissions in data description. The overview is partially effective. More precise data presentation is needed.

Coherence & Cohesion

5
The report's organization is inconsistent, and the flow of information is sometimes disrupted. Improvements in paragraphing and logical sequencing are needed to enhance coherence.

Lexical Resource

5.5
The vocabulary used is adequate but lacks range and precision in places. More sophisticated and precise language would improve the score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

4.5
Grammatical errors and inaccuracies affect the overall clarity and fluency of the report. Significant improvement in grammatical accuracy is required.

Answers On The Same Topic:

the graph below gives infromation on the numbers of participants for different activities at one social center in Melbourne, Australia for the period 2000 to 2020

The graph presents the information on the numbers of participants for different activities at one social centre in Melbourne, Australia from the year 2000 to 2020. Overall, each activities have different numbers of participants, the highest participants goes to the Film club. While the other activities approximately got similar numbers of participants, but at 2020 […]

Band 5+

the graph below gives infromation on the numbers of participants for different activities at one social center in Melbourne, Australia for the period 2000 to 2020

The line graph illustrates how the number of people in various activities changed over time for five categories, namely film club, martial arts, amateur dramatics, table tennis, and musical performances, in a particular community center in Melbourne, Australia between 2000 and 2020. Overall, participants in film club experienced the most noticeable increase, while martial arts […]

Band 4+

the graph below gives infromation on the numbers of participants for different activities at one social center in Melbourne, Australia for the period 2000 to 2020

The line graph illustrates how the numbers of people who had taken part in five various activities at one social centre in Melbourne,Australia between 2000 and 2020. Overall,the Film club and Martial arts fluctuated throughout the period,wheres Table tennis and Musical performanes were more participating places after Film club.Besides,Amateur dramatics lost interest of attendees suggesting […]

Band 4+
See All

Other Topics:

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The line graph below shows the percentage of spending in Turkey, from 1960 to 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The provided line graph illustrates the percentage of Turkey’s expenditure on food, leisure, clothing, transportation and energy between the year 1960 and 2000. Overall, spending on food and leisure gradually reduced throughout the period, while clothing increased steadily. Transport and Energy remained comparatively low and steady. Spending on food slightly dropped from 35% to aproximately […]

Band 7+

The graph below shows the favourite sport of people form the US between 1985 and 2015

The line graph compares the favourite sports of US citizens from 1985 to 2015. Overall, three sports became more popular (American Football, Basketball and Others Sports), and two sports became less popular (Baseball and Hockey). While American football consistently remained the most popular sport, Baseball was overtaken by Basketball, which became the second most popular. […]

Band 8+

The line graph shows the percentage of people using four different forms of transport in a city between 2000 and 2020.

The given line graph illustrates the different kind of transport system usage by people namely, Car, Bicycle, Bus, and by walking in a city from 2000 to 2020. Overall, it can be seen that car accounted highest share over the period except in final year. While walking reported least in all four form of transport. […]

Band 5+

The graph below gives information about the percentage of people living in Australia who were born in Asia, the UK, and other regions.

This graph shows a description about the proportion of citizens living in Australia who were born and grew up in Asia, the UK, and other regions. As we can see, the number of Asians in Australia has increased significantly from 1976 until 2011. The increase reached 15 percent in 2011. Data reveals a high interest […]

Band 5+

The line chart shows the trends of employement in the USA and predictions to the future.

The line chart illustrates employment patterns in the USA and predictions to the future. Overall, only services increased rapidly in the years of 1975 to 2025. On the contrary, agriculture sharply decreased between same years. In 1975, agriculture accounted for the largest share among other trend of employments, approximately 80 percent. In contrast, services and […]

Band 6+

Task 1: The graph shows the number of people taking part in 4 kinds of sports in a particular region between 1985 and 2005.

The graph shows the number of people who participated in particular sports (badminton, basketball, tennis, rugby) over a period of time (1985-2005) in the region. Overall, the number of participants in some sports did not change during the research period, while the number of participants in other sports dramatically increased or decreased. When we look […]

Band 7+
See All
We have detected unusual activity on your device.
Please verify your identity to continue.
Note: This verification step won't sign you in. If you have a premium account, please log in to access the service as usual.
Google/Gmail Verification
Or verify using Email/Code
We've sent a verification code to:
youremail@gmail.com (Not your email?)
Enter it below to complete the verification process.
Ensure your email address is correct, your inbox is not full, and you check your spam folder. If no email arrives, consider using an alternative email.
You will need a Premium plan to perform your action!
Note: If you already have a premium account, please log in to access our services as usual.

Plans & Pricing

Our mission is to make quality education accessible for everyone.
However, to keep our hardworking team running and this service alive, we genuinely need your support!
By opting for a premium plan, not only do you sustain us in achieving the mission, but you also unlock advanced features to enrich your learning experience.

Free

For learners who aren't pressed for time
What's included on Free
100+ Cambridge IELTS Tests
Instant IELTS Writing Task 1 & 2 Evaluation (2 times/month)
Instant IELTS Speaking Part 1, 2, & 3 Evaluation (5 times/month)
Instant IELTS Writing Task 1 & 2 Essay Generator (2 times/month)
500+ Dictation & Shadowing Exercises
100+ Pronunciation Exercises
Flashcards
Other Advanced Tools

Premium

For those serious about advancing their English proficiency, and for IELTS candidates aspiring to boost their band score by 1-2 points (especially in writing & speaking) in just 30 days or less
What's included on Premium
Save Your IELTS Test Progress
Unlock All Courses & IELTS Tests
Unlimited AI Conversations
Unlimited AI Writing Enhancement Exercises
Unlimited IELTS Writing Task 1 & 2 Evaluation
Unlimited IELTS Speaking Part 1, 2, & 3 Evaluation
Checked Answers Will Not Be Published
Unlimited IELTS Writing Task 1 & 2 Essay Generator
Unlimited IELTS Speaking Part 1, 2, & 3 Sample Generator
Unlimited Usage Of Advanced Tools
Priority Support within 24h (12-month plan only)
Click Here To Explore All Tools →
Limited Time Offer
30% OFF!
Ends in a few hours
Select a plan:
One-Time Payment Excellent Reviews Trusted by 1M+ Learners Unlimited Usage
$16.99 $11.97 for 1 month (only ¢40/day)
$50.99 $25.97 for 3 months (only ¢29/day) $8.66/mo
$101.99 $44.97 for 6 months (only ¢25/day) $7.50/mo
$204.99 $61.97 for 12 months (only ¢17/day) $5.16/mo Priority support!
Get 12 Months — Best Value →
Due to the nature of our service and the provided free trials, payments are non-refundable.
Nếu bạn là người Việt Nam và không có hoặc không muốn trả bằng credit/debit cards, bạn có thể thanh toán bằng phương thức chuyển khoản:



Chọn gói:
419,000₫ 277,000 ₫ cho gói 1 tháng (chỉ 9,233₫/ngày)
1,239,000₫ 597,000 ₫ cho gói 3 tháng (chỉ 6,633₫/ngày)
2,469,000₫ 1,027,000 ₫ cho gói 6 tháng (chỉ 5,706₫/ngày)
4,929,000₫ 1,417,000 ₫ cho gói 12 tháng (chỉ 3,936₫/ngày)


Sau khi chuyển khoản, vui lòng đợi trình duyệt tự động điều hướng bạn trở lại Engnovate và bạn sẽ ngay lập tức nhận được mã kích hoạt tài khoản premium.
Nếu có lỗi xảy ra, bạn có thể liên hệ với team thông qua một trong các phương thức: email đến helloengnovate@gmail.com hoặc nhắn tin qua facebook.com/engnovate.
Vì toàn bộ công cụ trên website đều có thể sử dụng thử miễn phí, Engnovate không hỗ trợ hoàn tiền.