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Band 4+: The graph below presents the employment patterns in the USA between 1930 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and report in the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image shows line graphs comparing USA labor force employment from 1930 to 2010 in five sectors: Industrial, Technical, Sales and Office, Other Services, and Farming, Fishing and Forestry. Industrial employment decreased from 70% to below 20%, Technical increased from below 20% to above 40%, Sales and Office increased from 10% to above 25%, Other Services increased from below 10% to above 25%, and Farming, Fishing and Forestry decreased from above 40% to below 5%.

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From 1930 to 2010 the graph shows employment patterns in the United States. firstly, it can be seen that in 1930 75% of labor in America are in agriculture, fishing and foresting employed while the second career that people do are sales and office workers around 10% of employment. In the same time, only 2% of people are working in industrial ans technical sectors.

Interestingly, in 1980 the amount of people who are working in agriculture sector are plummet to only 40% while industrial production are growing skyrocket to 20% and the rest career are increasing at the same time to 10%.

However, in 1990 number of employees industrial sector is still growing to same amount as employees in farming, fishing and foresting industries. furthermore, after 2000 agriculture works become the smallest employment in The States while other jobs are still growing especially in industrial and technical sectors that continue rising.

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The response addresses the task by summarizing the main features of the graph and making relevant comparisons. However, there are some inaccuracies and omissions in the data presented.

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While a variety of sentence structures are attempted, there are errors in verb tense consistency, subject-verb agreement, and word form. More attention to grammar accuracy is needed.

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