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Band 6+: The graph below presents the employment patterns in the USA between 1930 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and report in the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image shows line graphs comparing USA labor force employment from 1930 to 2010 in five sectors: Industrial, Technical, Sales and Office, Other Services, and Farming, Fishing and Forestry. Industrial employment decreased from 70% to below 20%, Technical increased from below 20% to above 40%, Sales and Office increased from 10% to above 25%, Other Services increased from below 10% to above 25%, and Farming, Fishing and Forestry decreased from above 40% to below 5%.

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In 1930, 75% of the labour force in the USA was employed in farming, fishing and foresting while only 10% worked in sales and office and trade. At the same time both the Industrial sector and the technical sector constituted just 2% of the workforce each. This situation changed only very gradually over the next 20 years, except for the technical workforce, which increased more than threefold.

However by 1980 there had been a significant change in the pattern of employment. While the farming, fishing and foresting employees had declined in number to 40% of the workforce, Industrial employees as well as technical had increased their share to 13% and 10% respectively.

Similarly the sales and office sectors did not increase until 1980. The most dramatic change could be seen by 2000, when the proportion of farming, fishing and foresting works reduced to just 10% while the three other major sectors had all increased to over 20% of the workforce.

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The response addresses the task by summarizing the main features of the graph and making relevant comparisons. However, there are some inaccuracies and omissions in the data presented.

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