Band 4+: The graph below show the percentage of people in one country who accessed the news from four resources from 1995 , with projections to 2025 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant

The report addresses the task by providing an overview and some key trends, but it contains several inaccuracies and omissions. The overall trend of TV and Internet becoming the most used sources, and the decline of radio and newspaper, is correctly identified. However, specific data points are often incorrect (e.g., TV at 70% instead of 68%, newspaper and radio at 30% and 25% in 2025 instead of 15% and 13%). The report also omits the crossover point where Internet overtakes TV, and the description of TV's trend is vague. To improve, ensure accurate data reporting, include specific comparisons (e.g., when Internet surpassed TV), and avoid vague language. Additionally, proofread for spelling and grammatical errors to enhance clarity. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

The report has a clear overall structure with an introduction, an overview, and body paragraphs, but the flow is sometimes disrupted by unclear referencing and abrupt transitions. For example, the phrase 'overtaking by internet in 2025' is ambiguous, and the final paragraph lacks a clear link to the previous one. To improve, use more cohesive devices (e.g., 'In contrast', 'Meanwhile') and ensure each paragraph has a clear central idea. Also, avoid introducing new information in the conclusion without proper development.

The vocabulary is adequate for the task, with some attempts at paraphrasing (e.g., 'accessed the news', 'popularity'), but there are frequent spelling errors (e.g., 'citezens', 'sourses', 'dramaticall', 'decrice', 'aproximatelly', 'steadly') and some awkward word choices (e.g., 'was main source', 'showed dramaticall decrice'). To improve, focus on accurate spelling and use more precise and varied vocabulary, such as 'witnessed a significant decline', 'remained the dominant source', and 'experienced a steady rise'.

The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including subject-verb agreement (e.g., 'TV and Internet was', 'Newspaper and Radio sources was'), incorrect verb forms (e.g., 'overtaking by internet'), and missing articles (e.g., 'percentage of citezens'). Punctuation is also inconsistent. To improve, review basic grammar rules, especially subject-verb agreement and tense consistency. Use a wider range of sentence structures, such as complex sentences with relative clauses, and proofread to eliminate errors.