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Band 4+: The graph below shows consumers’ average annual expenditure on cell phone, national and international fixed-line and services in America between 2001 and 2010.

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The image depicts a line graph comparing average annual expenditure on cell phone services, national fixed-line services, and international fixed-line services from 2001 to 2010. The cell phone services line increases steadily from $200 to over $700, the national fixed-line services line decreases from $700 to around $350, and the international fixed-line services line remains relatively constant around $200.

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The line chart show that the average annual expenditure on three diffent services in ten years.

Overall, we can see that there was not much change in International fixed-line servercies, for other two trend, cell phone was started reduce fequnly seacen the frist year, National fixed-line was in a opposite way.

Looking at the chart closely, there where a small increase for international fixed-line form2001 at $260 and it whent up ni the next year to $300 after that it becomeing stable for the next 8 years untill the 2010. For National line, it was the lowest in the friest year, it only spend $200 in the frist year , but the coust start clame in the next 10 years and it ended at the highset number of $750.

Move to the therid one, cell phone, this trend cost most in the begening of $700 but it start slowly reduce the money that needed in the after decaed, In the last year it only cost$400, whchi is $300 less copar to the frist year.

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The report attempts to describe the main trends in the graph but contains inaccuracies and lacks detail. The description of the data is not always clear or accurate, and the organization could be improved. To improve, focus on providing more precise data points and ensuring the trends are accurately represented. Also, pay attention to organizing the information logically, perhaps by dedicating a paragraph to each service type.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report lacks clear organization and paragraphing. The information is not presented in a logical order, making it difficult to follow the trends and comparisons. Consider organizing the report into clear paragraphs, each focusing on a specific aspect or trend in the data. Use cohesive devices (e.g., conjunctions, pronouns, and transition words) to link ideas and sentences together smoothly.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is basic and repetitive, with limited range and precision. There are instances of incorrect word choice ('clame' instead of 'climb,' 'therid' instead of 'third,' 'seacen' instead of 'since'). Expand your vocabulary related to describing trends (e.g., increase, decrease, fluctuate, peak, plateau) and use more precise language to convey the information accurately. Avoid informal language and use more formal vocabulary appropriate for academic writing.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, incorrect article usage, and sentence structure problems. These errors significantly impede understanding. Focus on improving your understanding of basic grammar rules and sentence construction. Proofread carefully to identify and correct errors before submitting your work.

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