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Band 4+: The graph below shows information about the use of public transport in one country, by age group and location of residence, in 2016. Summarise the information by slecting and reporting the main fatures, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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The image displays a line graph titled "Public transport use by age and place of residence, 2016," with age groups on the x-axis and percentage (%) of age group on the y-axis. Two lines represent "Large city residents" and "Other residents." Data points for Large city residents are approximately as follows: 0-15 (20%), 16-30 (70%), 31-45 (85%), 46-60 (65%), 61-75 (30%), 76+ (10%). Data points for Other residents are roughly: 0-15 (10%), 16-30 (40%), 31-45 (60%), 46-60 (40%), 61-75 (25%), and 76+ (15%).

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The line chart illustrates the use of public transportation in a particular country in 2016, categorized by age group and place of residence.

It is clear that, the percentage of the large city residents had consistent change in 2016. At the same time other residents had been decreasing gradually.

The large city residents use of public transportation 40% in 0-15 age group, this trend significantly rose around 65% at 31-45 age group. Then dramatically fall to 10% in 61-75, however, slightly up approximately 5% age of 76+.

Other residents use transportation near 15% of 0-15 age group. Appoximately 10% increased in 16-45 group then sharply fall to near 10% in 46-60 age group. After slightly rose almost 20% in 61-75 before fall bellow 10% in 76+ age group.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

group: 7

residents: 4

transportation: 3

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Task Response

The report identifies some main features but includes inaccuracies in the data reported. The description lacks a clear overview and sufficient comparative statements. To improve, focus on providing a more accurate and comprehensive summary of the data, including key trends and comparisons between the two groups. Ensure data points are correctly represented and avoid focusing too much on individual data points without providing context. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report lacks clear organization and logical flow. The overview is weak, and the subsequent paragraphs present data without sufficient connection or comparison. The progression of ideas is difficult to follow, and the writing appears disjointed. Use cohesive devices more effectively to link ideas and create a smoother flow. Improve paragraphing by grouping related information together and providing clear topic sentences.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is limited and lacks precision. There are instances of inappropriate word choice and a failure to use a range of vocabulary to describe the data accurately. Expand your vocabulary related to describing trends and data. Focus on using more precise language to convey the information in the graph. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and incorrect preposition usage. Sentence structure is often awkward and unclear. Focus on improving your understanding and application of basic grammar rules. Proofread carefully to identify and correct errors.

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