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Band 6+: The graph below shows information about the use of public transport in one coutry, by age group and location of residence, in 2016.

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The image displays "Public transport use by age and place of residence, 2016" with two categories: large city residents and other residents. For age group 0-15, large city residents: 40%, other residents: 22%. Age group 16-30, large city residents: 70%, other residents: 42%. Age group 31-45, large city residents: 58%, other residents: 23%. Age group 46-60, large city residents: 30%, other residents: 12%. Age group 61-75, large city residents: 19%, other residents: 8%. Age group 76+, large city residents: 11%, other residents: 5%.

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The graph compares the various age group people using public transport from different places in 2016.

Overall, people of age 31-45, resident in large city, showed the highest use of local transport, while other residents of age 16-30 had greater usage. Additionally, both residents steadily lower using public transport involving older age group.

In 2016, residents of large city begun at 40% of local transport usage which increased to roughly 54% including teenagers to adults, while other residents accounted about 15% that slightly rose to nearly 27% of using the convince, of same age group. In age group 31-45 of large city residents, the use of transport reached its peak to approximately 68%, while there was a decline in other residents usage to 15% only.

Over the same time period, the trend of using public transport by both residents started to decrease consistently, while other residents presented fluctuation. The least use remained 10% by large city residents and 4% by other residents including the older age group of 76+.

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The report addresses the task and provides an overall description, but it contains several inaccuracies and omissions. The overall trend is correctly identified, but specific data points are often misreported (e.g., the peak for large city residents is stated as 68% instead of 58%, and the initial values for other residents are incorrect). The report also omits some age groups and misinterprets the data for the 16-30 group. To improve, ensure accurate data representation and cover all age groups clearly. Focus on precise figures and avoid vague descriptions like 'roughly' and 'nearly' when exact numbers are available.

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The report has a logical structure with an introduction, overview, and detailed paragraphs. However, the flow is sometimes disrupted by unclear referencing and awkward phrasing. For example, 'both residents steadily lower using public transport involving older age group' is confusing. The use of cohesive devices is limited, and some sentences are not well-connected. To improve, use clearer topic sentences and ensure each paragraph has a clear focus. Also, use a range of linking words and referencing to enhance coherence.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate but not always precise or varied. There are some inaccuracies such as 'the convince' (likely meant 'convenience') and 'begun' instead of 'began'. The report uses some good phrases like 'reached its peak' and 'presented fluctuation', but overall the range is limited. To improve, use more specific and varied vocabulary related to data description (e.g., 'accounted for', 'constituted', 'experienced a decline'). Also, ensure correct word choice and avoid informal or incorrect terms. Pay attention to vocabulary repetition to improve the overall score.

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The report contains a mix of simple and complex sentences, but there are several grammatical errors and awkward structures. For example, 'residents of large city begun at 40%' should be 'began', and 'other residents accounted about 15%' should be 'accounted for about 15%'. There are also issues with subject-verb agreement and article usage. To improve, review grammar rules for past tense, prepositions, and articles. Practice writing more complex sentences with accurate grammar, and proofread to eliminate errors.

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