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Band 4+: The graph below shows the average daily sales of selected food items at Jawaaf Café and Dailo Restaurant.

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The image depicts average daily sales of food items at Jawaaf Café and Dailo Restaurant. Hot coffee sales at Jawaaf Café reach approximately 70, while Dailo Restaurant registers around 25. Iced coffee sales stand at about 50 for Jawaaf Café and 20 for Dailo Restaurant. Ice cream sales are roughly 45 for Jawaaf Café and 30 for Dailo Restaurant. Soup records nearly 35 sales for Dailo Restaurant and 25 for Jawaaf Café. Salad sales total approximately 15 for both Jawaaf Café and Dailo Restaurant.

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The bar chart demonstrates the estimated sales of particular food items at Jawaaaf Cafe and Dailo Restraunt.

Overall, it can be seen that the Jawaaf cafe has had the highest sales whereas Dailo restaurant lesser. In addition there was a point when both had the same sales on an item.

To start with Jawaaf cafe, hot coffee had the most servings which is 75 per week whereas soup is the second item to have the most servings of 50 per week. Now talking about Dailo restraunt, iced coffee had 40 servings per week which is the largest number of sales among all other items and to talk about the least soup and salad can be noted to have 22 servings respectively.

In contrast, there can be seen the least amount of servings in Jawaaf cafe which is 2 servings of iced coffee whereas 22 servings of ice cream and salad remained the same. In addition the serving of salad in both the cafe and restraunt remained the same.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

servings: 7

sales: 4

dailo: 3

jawaaf: 3

whereas: 3

coffee: 3

which: 3

salad: 3

Try using synonyms for the above words

Task Response

The report attempts to address the task by describing the sales data for the two establishments, but it contains several inaccuracies and misinterpretations of the data. For example, it states that hot coffee sales at Jawaaf Café are 75 per week, while the data indicates approximately 70. It also incorrectly identifies soup as the second highest at Jawaaf Café and misrepresents the sales figures for Dailo Restaurant, such as stating iced coffee had 40 servings. The report includes irrelevant or inappropriate information, such as mentioning 'per week' when the task specifies 'daily sales'. Additionally, there are spelling errors (e.g., 'Jawaaaf', 'Restraunt') and unclear phrasing. To improve, focus on accurately reporting the data from the visual description, avoid adding unsupported details, and ensure the overview correctly summarizes the main trends without exaggeration.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a basic structure with an introduction, an overview, and a body paragraph, but the flow of information is somewhat disjointed. The overview could be clearer and more comprehensive. The use of cohesive devices is limited and sometimes awkward (e.g., 'To start with', 'Now talking about', 'In contrast'). Paragraphing could be improved to better organize the comparison between the two establishments. Consider using a clearer structure, such as comparing each food item across both venues, and using a wider range of linking words and phrases to improve the logical progression of ideas.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is quite basic and repetitive (e.g., 'servings', 'sales', 'restraunt'). There are also spelling errors ('Jawaaaf', 'Restraunt', 'restraunt'). The range of words is limited, and there is little attempt to use more sophisticated or precise vocabulary. To improve, try to use synonyms for 'sales' (e.g., 'figures', 'numbers', 'amounts') and 'servings' (e.g., 'portions', 'units'). Also, ensure correct spelling of key terms like 'café' and 'restaurant'. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors and awkward phrasings. For example, 'Jawaaf cafe has had the highest sales whereas Dailo restaurant lesser' is incomplete and unclear. There are issues with subject-verb agreement and article usage (e.g., 'the least amount of servings in Jawaaf cafe which is 2 servings of iced coffee'). Sentence structures are often simple and repetitive. To improve, focus on constructing complete and grammatically correct sentences, and try to use a mix of simple and complex structures. Pay attention to articles (a, an, the) and prepositions.

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