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Band 5+: The graph below shows the average daily sales of selected ford items at the Brisk Cafe, by season. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image displays a bar chart titled 'Average Daily Sales' quantifying the 'Number of servings' for five food items during 'Winter' and 'Summer'. In Winter, sales were: Hot coffee approximately 75, Iced coffee approximately 3, Ice cream 25, Soup 50, and Salad 25. In Summer, sales were: Hot coffee 30, Iced coffee 40, Ice cream approximately 35, Soup 25, and Salad 25.

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The bar chart shows food and drink sales in the brisk cafe in winter and summer. It shows five pictures : hot coffee, iced coffee, ice cream, soup and salad.

In winter hot coffee is the most popular .The cafe sell about 75 cups every day. Soup is also popular in winter. Ice cream and salad both have about 25 . Ice coffee is the less popular in winter. It sell only about 2 or 3 cups per day.

In summer the situation changes. Iced coffee becomes very popular. The cafe sell about 40 cups per day. Ice cream is also popular in summer. Hot coffee sale about 30 cups per day.

In winter, people like hot food and drinks more. In summer, they like cold more.

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Overall Band Score

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A1 - Beginner
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

coffee: 6

winter: 5

popular: 5

about: 5

summer: 4

cream: 3

Try using synonyms for the above words

Task Response

The report identifies some key features and makes some relevant comparisons between winter and summer sales. However, the description lacks detail and precision. To improve, provide more specific data points and avoid vague language. Also, ensure the summary covers all the main features of the graph, including the sales figures for all items in both seasons. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report presents a basic overview of the data but lacks a clear structure and logical flow. The organization into paragraphs is somewhat arbitrary, and the transitions between ideas could be smoother. Consider using more cohesive devices to link sentences and paragraphs, and ensure each paragraph focuses on a specific aspect of the data. For example, you could dedicate a paragraph to comparing and contrasting the sales of each item across seasons.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is simple and repetitive. There is limited use of synonyms or more precise language to describe the data. To improve, try to incorporate a wider range of vocabulary related to sales trends and comparisons. For instance, instead of repeatedly using 'popular,' consider alternatives like 'in demand,' 'favored,' or 'highly consumed.' Also, use more specific terms to describe the quantities, such as 'a significant portion' or 'a marginal amount.' Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses ('sell' instead of 'sells'), subject-verb agreement issues, and awkward phrasing. While the overall meaning is understandable, these errors detract from the clarity and professionalism of the writing. Focus on improving your understanding of basic grammar rules and sentence structure. Proofread carefully to identify and correct errors before submitting your work.

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