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Band 5+: The graph below shows the changes in production (millions)of three products in agarment factory from 1990 to 2010. Summarize the information by selecting andreporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.Write at least 150 words.

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The image displays production data of suits, dresses, and coats from 1990 to 2010 with units in millions. In 1990, suits were at 18 million, dresses at 10 million, and coats at 5 million. By 1995, suits increased to 25 million while dresses reached 12 million and coats climbed to 10 million. In 2000, suits had decreased to 20 million, dresses had risen to 15 million, and coats had grown to 15 million. By 2005, suits further declined to 17 million, dresses reached 18 million, and coats increased to 22 million. In 2010, suits slightly fell to 15 million, dresses stayed at 20 million, and coats peaked at 27 million.

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The line graph compares cloth production in terms of suit, dress and coat in garment factory between 1990 and 2010. Overall, all categories experienced an upward trend throughout the period, with coat representing the most significant increase.

Looking first at suit and dress, the figure for suit stood at 15 million in 1990, then increased dramatically from 15 million to approximately 23 million in 1995, before dropped significantly to about 16 million in 2005. After that, the number of suit production rose slightly to approximately 19 million by the end of the period. However, dress started at 10 million production in 1990, then increased marginally to approximately 16 military in 2000, before reaching 15 million in the final year.

Turning to coat production, the figure for coat production representing the most significant increase, it started approximately 8 million in 1990 and then increased considerably from 8 million to 20 military in 2000, before reaching 25 million by the end of the period.

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million: 10

production: 5

approximately: 4

dress: 3

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increased: 3

before: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the task and provides an overview, but it contains several inaccuracies and omissions. The overall trend is described as upward for all products, which is not accurate for suits (which generally declined after 1995). Some data points are incorrect (e.g., suits starting at 15 million instead of 18, coats starting at 8 million instead of 5, and dresses ending at 15 million instead of 20). Additionally, the report omits the 2005 data for dresses and coats, and the phrase '16 military' is an inappropriate term. To improve, ensure all key data points are accurately reported and avoid using informal or incorrect vocabulary. Focus on clearly describing trends for each product with correct figures.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a clear overall structure with an introduction and separate paragraphs for different products, which helps the reader follow the main ideas. However, the flow is sometimes disrupted by awkward phrasing and unclear references (e.g., 'the figure for coat production representing the most significant increase, it started...'). The use of cohesive devices is limited and sometimes inaccurate, making the text less smooth. To improve, use a wider range of linking words and phrases (e.g., 'In contrast', 'Meanwhile', 'Subsequently') and ensure each paragraph has a clear topic sentence and logical progression of ideas.

Lexical Resource

The report uses some appropriate vocabulary for describing trends (e.g., 'increased dramatically', 'rose slightly', 'significant increase'), but there are noticeable errors and awkward choices that reduce precision. For example, 'military' is used instead of 'million', and 'cloth production' is less precise than 'garment production'. The range of vocabulary is adequate but not wide, and some phrases are repetitive (e.g., 'the figure for' is used multiple times). To improve, expand your range of synonyms for 'increase' and 'decrease' (e.g., 'surge', 'plummet', 'fluctuate') and ensure correct word choice and collocations.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity and accuracy. There are issues with verb forms (e.g., 'before dropped' should be 'before dropping'), subject-verb agreement, and incorrect use of articles and prepositions. The sentence structures are mostly simple, with limited use of complex sentences. To improve, practice using a variety of sentence structures, such as relative clauses and conditional sentences, and review grammar rules for verb tenses and prepositions. Proofreading for common errors like 'military' instead of 'million' is also essential.

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