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Band 4+: The graph below shows the number of people employed in sport in thousands in selected EU countries between 2011 and 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image shows a line graph detailing employment in sport throughout 2011-2014 measured in thousands of people across six countries: Belgium, Czech Republic, Estonia, Bulgaria, Denmark, and Ireland. In 2011, Belgium recorded approximately 23,000, Czech Republic nearly 14,000, Estonia about 8,000, Bulgaria around 5,000, Denmark approximately 25,000, and Ireland about 16,000. By 2012, Belgium's figure rose slightly above 24,000, Czech Republic decreased to nearly 11,000, Estonia edged up to around 8,500, Bulgaria continued just over 5,000, Denmark dipped below 24,000, and Ireland increased marginally to about 17,000. In 2013, Belgium climbed over 25,000, Czech Republic steadied close to 12,000, Estonia surged to around 9,000, Bulgaria remained steady over 5,000, Denmark stalled at approximately 24,000, and Ireland marginally rose beyond 17,000. In 2014, Belgium peaked beyond 26,000, Czech Republic grew steadily to above 15,000, Estonia reached just above 10,000, Bulgaria maintained its plateau over 5,000, Denmark heightened to roughly 27,000, and Ireland continued its ascension nearing 19,000.

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The chart illustrates the amount of thousands of employment in sport in EU countries from 2011 to 2014.

Overall, The level of employment in Denmark, Czech Republic, and Belgium was the highest in 2011, while other countries stayed below with the Estonia remains lowest throughout the year.

Started off with the emploment amount in 2011, Denmark is nearly between 25 to 30 thousands, leading the first place, with Czech Republic following in second. In 2012, there was a slight dip in Czech Republic, making it a third place, diverging with Belgium nearly to 20 thousands, and before ascending approximately to thirty thousands, surpassing Denmark in 2014.

In Belgium, the number of employment levelled out at nearly twenty-five thousands between 2011 and 2012 before dropping marginally to closely 20 thousands in 2014. The other countries remained steadily over the 4 years with Bulgium at roughly ten thousands and Ireland at around five thousands.

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thousands: 8

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czech: 3

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belgium: 3

nearly: 3

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The report attempts to address the task but contains significant inaccuracies and omissions. It misidentifies the highest and lowest countries, misreports key data (e.g., Belgium's figures, Bulgaria and Ireland values), and fails to mention Estonia and Bulgaria by name. The overall trend is not clearly summarized, and comparisons are limited. To improve, ensure all countries are covered, accurately report the main trends and values, and provide a clear overview with relevant comparisons.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a basic structure with an introduction and an overall statement, but the progression of ideas is often unclear and difficult to follow. The use of cohesive devices is limited and sometimes inaccurate, causing confusion (e.g., 'Started off with...', 'diverging with...'). Paragraphing is not effectively managed, and the report lacks a clear logical flow when describing trends and comparisons. To improve, organize the information more clearly, use a range of linking words accurately, and ensure each paragraph has a clear central idea.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is limited and repetitive, with some inappropriate word choices (e.g., 'amount of thousands of employment', 'levelled out', 'Bulgium' instead of 'Bulgaria'). There is little flexibility in lexical use, and the report does not demonstrate a wide range of vocabulary. To improve, use a broader range of precise vocabulary related to trends (e.g., 'increase', 'decline', 'fluctuate', 'plateau') and ensure correct word forms and collocations. Avoid informal or incorrect expressions.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors and punctuation issues that significantly affect clarity. There are problems with subject-verb agreement, tense consistency, and sentence structure (e.g., 'The level of employment in Denmark, Czech Republic, and Belgium was the highest...' but later 'Denmark is nearly...'). The range of grammatical structures is limited, and errors are frequent. To improve, practice using a variety of sentence structures accurately, ensure subject-verb agreement, and proofread to correct basic errors. Focus on using past tense consistently when describing data over a past period.

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