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Band 5+: The graph below shows the number of people employed in a European country by age and gender. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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The image shows employment by age and gender in 2013, with the following data points in thousands: Age 15-19: Males ~80, Females ~70; 20-24: Males ~280, Females ~230; 25-29: Males ~380, Females ~340; 30-34: Males ~480, Females ~420; 35-39: Males ~500, Females ~450; 40-44: Males ~520, Females ~450; 45-49: Males ~500, Females ~430; 50-54: Males ~470, Females ~410; 55-59: Males ~400, Females ~330; 60-64: Males ~230, Females ~180; 65-74: Males ~70, Females ~35; 75+: Males ~5, Females ~5.

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The bar graph illustrates the proportion of peope in employment by age and gender in a Europe country.

Overall, a higher number of male were employed than women in a Europe country as the age get older. Employment people increased in each age over the age go up. The proportion of women were employed varied significantly across the various ages.

Around age 40-44 had the highest proportion of men and women employment, with a number around 550 numbers.In contrast, age above 75 had the lowest proportion of men employment number than at the youngester age, at about just under the total of 10.

The highest number of women employment were also around age 40-44, with 390 numbers. In comparison, age 75 and above had the lowest numbers of women employment, just under the total of 5, as the age get older. In conclusion, As the age increased, the number of employment were decreasing.

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The main features of the graph are summarized, but some aspects could be more precisely described and compared. Minor inaccuracies are present.

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