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Band 5+: The graph below shows the perceived danger and actual likelihood of being a victim of crime. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image displays a bar graph indicating perceived and actual likelihoods of becoming a crime victim in three categories over two periods. For Burglary: Perceived 2009/10 equals approximately 23%, Actual 2009/10 equals around 2%, Perceived 2010/11 measures about 20%, Actual 2010/11 is estimated at 3%. Regarding Car Crime: Perceived 2009/10 is roughly 22%, Actual 2009/10 is about 7%, Perceived 2010/11 stands at approximately 21%, Actual 2010/11 is slightly under 8%. In terms of Violent Crime: Perceived 2009/10 reaches around 19%, Actual 2009/10 is near 3%, Perceived 2010/11 approximates 20%, Actual 2010/11 is close to 4%.

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The given bar graph illustrate estimated and actual danger of being victim of crime in 2009/10 and 2010/11. Data is given in percentage.

Overall, the bar graph has three type of crime, burglary, car crime and violet crime. The perceived danger is shown far greater than actual rate of crime. Car crime had highest number of victim, while burglary and violent crime had similar cases

Looking at the information, the prediction of the car crime was above 20% in 2009/10. But the actual percentage was just below 5% in same period of time. In 2010/11, perceived danger of car crime was reduced, while the actual car crime rate was similar to 2009/10.

Regards to remaining information, the perceived danger of burglary and violent crime was equal in 2009/10 and 2010/11 just above 15%. However the crime rate of burglary and violent crime were significantly less than predicted numbers. In 2009/10, crime rate of burglary and violent crime was approximately 3% and remained same in 2010/11.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

crime: 15

burglary: 5

actual: 4

danger: 4

2009/10: 4

2010/11: 4

violent: 4

perceived: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the task by presenting an overview and some key features, but it contains several inaccuracies and omissions. The overall trend (perceived danger higher than actual) is correctly identified, and comparisons are attempted. However, specific data points are often incorrect (e.g., car crime actual is stated as 'just below 5%' instead of around 7-8%, and burglary/violent crime perceived is said to be 'just above 15%' instead of around 19-23%). Additionally, the report omits some specific figures and fails to mention the slight changes in perceived and actual rates over the two periods. To improve, ensure that all data is accurately reported and that the main features are clearly highlighted with precise numbers. Also, avoid vague statements like 'similar cases' and 'remained same' without providing exact values.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a clear overall structure with an introduction, an overview, and two body paragraphs. However, the flow is sometimes disrupted by awkward phrasing and unclear referencing (e.g., 'Regards to remaining information' and 'the prediction of the car crime'). The paragraphing is logical, but the use of cohesive devices is limited and sometimes inaccurate. To improve, use a wider range of linking words and phrases (e.g., 'In contrast', 'Similarly', 'Furthermore') and ensure that each paragraph has a clear central topic. Also, avoid informal or incorrect transitions like 'Regards to' - use 'With regard to' or 'Regarding'.

Lexical Resource

The report uses some appropriate vocabulary related to the task (e.g., 'perceived danger', 'actual rate', 'victim of crime'). However, there are several lexical errors and limited range. For example, 'violet crime' should be 'violent crime', and 'the prediction of the car crime' is awkward - better to say 'the perceived danger of car crime'. The phrase 'had highest number of victim' is ungrammatical and should be 'had the highest number of victims'. To improve, expand your vocabulary to include synonyms for 'perceived' (e.g., 'estimated', 'reported') and 'actual' (e.g., 'real', 'recorded'), and use more precise terms like 'approximately', 'just over', 'slightly less than' to describe data. Also, ensure correct word forms and collocations. Pay attention to vocabulary repetition to improve the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors that affect clarity. For example, 'The given bar graph illustrate' should be 'illustrates' (subject-verb agreement), and 'being victim' should be 'being a victim'. There are also issues with articles ('the prediction of the car crime' - unnecessary 'the'), prepositions ('Regards to' - incorrect), and pluralization ('victim' should be 'victims'). The sentence 'In 2009/10, crime rate of burglary and violent crime was approximately 3% and remained same in 2010/11' lacks an article before 'crime rate' and 'same' should be 'the same'. To improve, practice using a wider range of sentence structures, including complex sentences, and review basic grammar rules such as subject-verb agreement, articles, and prepositions. Proofreading your work can help catch these errors.

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