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Band 5+: The graph below shows the perceived danger and actual likelihood of being a victim of crime. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image displays a bar graph indicating perceived and actual likelihoods of becoming a crime victim in three categories over two periods. For Burglary: Perceived 2009/10 equals approximately 23%, Actual 2009/10 equals around 2%, Perceived 2010/11 measures about 20%, Actual 2010/11 is estimated at 3%. Regarding Car Crime: Perceived 2009/10 is roughly 22%, Actual 2009/10 is about 7%, Perceived 2010/11 stands at approximately 21%, Actual 2010/11 is slightly under 8%. In terms of Violent Crime: Perceived 2009/10 reaches around 19%, Actual 2009/10 is near 3%, Perceived 2010/11 approximates 20%, Actual 2010/11 is close to 4%.

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The bar graph illustrates the perceived and actual likelihood of begin a victim of crime by three different categories of thief, during the period of three years (2009 to 2011). The scale is in percentages.

Overall, it is evident that the numbers of crimes were consider very high despite of that the actual crimes were a quarter of all of perceived. Whereas, Burgulary and Violent crime was similar in aceptation and actual retes of percentages.

To begin with Burglary and Violent crime, over the period of 2009/10 and 2010/11 the prediction were nearly 15% and 10% in both the cases. Whereas, the actual crime rates of Burglary was approximately 2% in both the years. In a similar way, the actual rates of violent crime was only 1% far than Burglary, which was 3% in both the years.

Moreover, the highest number of car thief perceived in 2009/10 was just over 20% and in 2010/11 was just less approximately 3%. In comparison of actual thief of car rates was same which is 4% respectively.

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actual: 6

crime: 5

perceived: 3

thief: 3

violent: 3

burglary: 3

rates: 3

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Task Response

The report generally addresses the requirements of the task, but there are some inaccuracies and a lack of clarity. The organization is present but could be improved. The description of the data contains some errors, and the comparison between the perceived and actual likelihoods could be more effectively highlighted. To improve, focus on accurately representing the data and ensuring clear and precise language throughout the report.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report's organization is somewhat unclear, and the flow of information could be improved. The introduction is present, but the overview could be more comprehensive, summarizing the main trends more effectively. Paragraphing is attempted, but the connections between ideas within and between paragraphs need strengthening. Use cohesive devices more effectively to guide the reader through the information. For example, transitions between paragraphs could be smoother, and the relationships between data points could be clarified using linking words and phrases.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is somewhat limited and occasionally inaccurate ('thief' instead of 'crime'). There is some repetition of words and phrases. To improve, try to use a wider range of vocabulary related to crime statistics and trends. Paraphrase information from the graph more effectively, and avoid direct repetition of words from the task prompt. Use synonyms and varied sentence structures to demonstrate a broader lexical range.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and awkward phrasing. Sentence structures are relatively simple, and there is a lack of complex sentence constructions. To improve, focus on using a wider range of grammatical structures with greater accuracy. Pay attention to verb tense consistency, correct article usage, and proper sentence construction. Proofread carefully to identify and correct grammatical errors.

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