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Band 6+: The graph below shows the percentage of overweight people in the population from 1994 to 2007. Summarise the information by selectinng and reporting the main features, and make comparision where relevant.

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The image shows a graph depicting the percentage of overweight people in the population from 1993 to 2005, with separate lines for women and men. In 1993, around 17% of men and 21% of women were overweight. By 1995, both increased slightly to approximately 18% for men and 22% for women. In 1997, men were at about 22% and women at about 23%. Around 1999, men reached 27% and women 29%. By 2001, both men and women saw a notable increase, with men at roughly 30% and women at about 34%. In 2003, the estimates were 35% for men and 38% for women. By 2005, the percentages rose to about 37% for men and nearly 40% for women.

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The line grapgh gives information about how many males and females were obese between 1993 and 2005.

Overall, it is clear that the share of both women and men saw an upward trend with women dominating in the graph. Moreover, the share of overweight men exceeded that of women at the end of the period.

As the graph shows, females accounted for around 23% in the 1993, which was about 5% higher that of males at the same time. Then, it experienced a significant rise of 10%, between 1993 and 1997, and then it continued its upward trend to just under 40% in 2001. After that, it fluctuated minimally between 33% and 36% until the end of the given period.

When it comes to males, the percentage of overweighted men composed 17% in the beginning od the period. After that, it registered a considerable increase of around 10%, in the five year period ending in 1998. Then, the rate of men remained unchanged until 2001, however, it saw a sharp climb of almost 10%, from 30% to 40% in 2005, exceeding the rate of overweighted females.

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6.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

males: 3

females: 3

between: 3

women: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the main trends and provides a comparison between the two groups. However, there are significant inaccuracies in the data reporting that affect the clarity of the summary. For instance, the report states that the percentage of men exceeded women at the end of the period, which contradicts the visual description provided. Additionally, some specific data points (such as the fluctuations and the final percentages) do not align with the provided trends. To improve, ensure that the trends described (such as 'fluctuated minimally' or 'remained unchanged') accurately reflect the movement shown in the data, and double-check that comparisons between the two categories are consistent throughout the text.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is logically organized with a clear introduction, overview, and body paragraphs divided by gender. The use of cohesive devices like 'Moreover', 'As the graph shows', and 'When it comes to' helps the flow. However, some transitions could be smoother, and there is a slight logical contradiction in the overview where it states women 'dominated' but then claims men 'exceeded' women at the end. Ensure the overview accurately reflects the final trend to maintain perfect coherence.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate for describing trends (e.g., 'upward trend', 'significant rise', 'fluctuated minimally'). However, there are some inaccuracies in word choice and formation, such as using 'obese' instead of 'overweight' (which changes the meaning), 'overweighted' instead of 'overweight', and 'composed 17%' instead of 'stood at 17%'. Aim for more precise academic collocations and ensure the terminology matches the task description exactly. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates a mix of simple and complex sentence structures. However, there are several grammatical errors that affect the precision of the writing, such as 'higher that of males' (should be 'higher than'), 'in the 1993' (should be 'in 1993'), and 'beginning od' (typo). There are also issues with comma usage and sentence boundaries. To improve, focus on refining prepositional use and ensuring subject-verb agreement and correct comparative structures.

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