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Band 4+: The graph below shows the percentage of people unemployed in the total labour work force across 9 countries in 1994 and 2004. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image shows a table of unemployed rates in the labor force for eight countries in 1994 and 2004. In 1994: Ireland 14.8%, Poland 12.4%, Italy 11.8%, Canada 10.6%, the UK 9.5%, Germany 7%, the USA 7.2%, Australia 5%, Japan 2.7%. In 2004: Ireland 4.4%, Poland 19%, Italy 8.4%, Canada 7.7%, the UK 4.7%, Germany 9.4%, the USA 5.4%, Australia 5.4%, Japan 4.7%.

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The graph illustrate the percentage of total labour force of unemployed in 9 countries in 1994 and 2004.

In 1994, amount of umeployed rate in labour force in Ireland is about 4.4 percent however,in 2004 it is about 4.4 percent.furthermore, I says the percent of umeployed rate in labour force in 1994 is about 12.4 percent while in 2004 it is 19%.Italy has 11.8 percent umeployed labour force in 1994 although it reduce to 8.4 percent in 2004. In Canada out of the work number is about 10.6 percent in 1994 though in 2004 they lead to 7.7 percent. In UK out of the work percentage is about 9.5 in 1994 but in 2004 it decrease to 4.7. idle proportion of labour force in German is about 7 percent in 1994 but in 2004 it rose to 9.4 percent. In the USA proportion of out of the work in 1994 is 7.2 percent then it also decline to 5.4 percent in 2004. Moreover, amount of idle in Australia is 5 percent although, it rise to 5.4 percent in 2004.lastly, Japan have 2.7 percent idle force in 1994 however,in 2004 it is rose to 4.7 percent.

In conclusion, the highest employed proportion is 14.8 percent in Ireland in 1994 and the lowest is 2.7 percent in Japan. The other largest idle amount in 2004 is 19 percent in proland but in Ireland they are smallest percentage which is about 4.4 percent

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The report generally addresses the requirements of the task, but there are some inaccuracies and a lack of clear overview. The report would benefit from a more structured overview and clearer identification of key trends. Also, the language contains errors.

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The report lacks clear organization and paragraphing. The information is presented as a series of individual data points without a clear overview or synthesis. The writing does not group countries based on trends (increase, decrease, or stability in unemployment rates). The conclusion is very basic and doesn't offer a strong summary of the overall trends. To improve, group countries by similar trends, provide an overview of the general trends before detailing specific countries, and ensure the conclusion summarizes the key observations.

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The vocabulary is limited and repetitive. There's over-reliance on phrases like 'amount of,' 'percent of,' and 'in 1994/2004.' The report uses 'umeployed' instead of 'unemployed' consistently. To improve, use a wider range of vocabulary to describe changes and quantities. For example, use 'fell,' 'increased,' 'remained stable,' 'significant decrease,' 'slight increase,' etc. Proofread carefully for spelling errors. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

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The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and incorrect use of prepositions. Sentence structure is often awkward and unclear. For example, 'In 1994, amount of umeployed rate in labour force in Ireland is about 4.4 percent however,in 2004 it is about 4.4 percent' is grammatically incorrect and unclear. To improve, focus on using correct grammar and sentence structure. Review basic grammar rules and practice writing simple sentences before attempting more complex ones. Proofread carefully for errors.

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