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Band 4+: The graph below shows the percentage of urban/suburban and rural households in a certain country that had Internet access between 2011 and 2016. Summarize' the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image shows a graph of household internet access (percentage-wise) for urban/suburban and rural households between 2011 and 2016. Urban/Suburban access starts at 30% in 2011, increases to 35% in 2012, 45% in 2013, around 47% in 2014, approximately 53% in 2015 and peaks at 55% in 2016. Rural access starts at slightly below 5% in 2011, rises to just above 10% in 2012, climbs to roughly 15% in 2013, around 20% in 2014, approximately 23% in 2015, and reaches around 25% in 2016.

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The chart displays the percentage of viken/fuburban late house lund internet access in urban/suburban and rural areas of a certain country from 2011 to 2016.

the Boch figures are shown to increase as the years go by. Notably, the figures shewing the rise of urban/suburban household internet accessibility has a far more higher percentage than that of rural househrids. Its lowest bar would be at abeut 15% in 2011, 12% mere than rural internet access of abestt approximately 3%. Its highest percentage however, sits at 55% in 2016, while rural households have only accumulated 35% in internet access in the same year.

the The biggest marginal difference would be between the two types of household areas would be in 2014, with urban/suburban figure at 50%, 35% more than the internet accessible in rural areas which only sits at 15t. We can conclude that rural households, while gradually increasing on its percentage of internet access, Still pales in comparison to the numbers the urban/suburban household holds.

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internet: 6

rural: 6

percentage: 4

access: 4

urban/suburban: 4

areas: 3

household: 3

would: 3

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Task Response

The report attempts to address the task by describing the general upward trend for both household types and making some comparisons. However, there are several inaccuracies in the data (e.g., starting values, 2014 figures, and the 2016 rural percentage) and some irrelevant or unclear phrasing (e.g., 'viken/fuburban late house lund'). The report also omits specific data points for several years, which limits the completeness of the overview. To improve, focus on accurately reporting the main trends and key figures, and ensure all comparisons are clear and supported by the data.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a logical structure with an introduction, overview, and body paragraphs, but the flow is disrupted by frequent errors and awkward phrasing. The use of cohesive devices is limited and sometimes inaccurate, making the message harder to follow. To improve, use clearer paragraphing and more precise linking words to guide the reader through the data and comparisons.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary range is limited and there are several spelling errors and incorrect word choices (e.g., 'viken/fuburban', 'lund', 'Boch', 'shewing', 'househrids', 'abestt', 'marginal'). While some attempts at comparison are made, the language is not always accurate or natural. To improve, expand your vocabulary for describing trends and comparisons, and proofread to eliminate spelling mistakes.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are numerous grammatical errors throughout the report, including subject-verb agreement ('figures shewing... has'), incorrect comparatives ('far more higher'), and sentence structure issues. Punctuation is also inconsistent. To improve, focus on writing clear, grammatically correct sentences and review basic grammar rules, especially for comparisons and tense consistency.

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