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The image shows a line graph depicting the percentage of workers with illness absence in five European countries from 1991 to 2001: Netherlands (Net), Sweden (Swe), France (Fra), UK, Germany (Ger). In 1991: Net 3.5, Swe 4.5, Fra 7, UK 2, Ger 5. In 1992: Net 4, Swe 4.5, Fra 6.5, UK 2, Ger 5. In 1993: Net 4, Swe 4.5, Fra 6.5, UK 2, Ger 4.5. In 1994: Net 5, Swe 4.5, Fra 5, UK 2, Ger 4.5. In 1995: Net 4, Swe 5, Fra 5, UK 2.5, Ger 4.5. In 1996: Net 4.5, Swe 5, Fra 5, UK 2.5, Ger 3.5. In 1997: Net 4, Swe 5, Fra 4.5, UK 2.5, Ger 3.5. In 1998: Net 4, Swe 4.5, Fra 4.5, UK 3, Ger 3. In 1999: Net 3.5, Swe 4.5, Fra 4.5, UK 3, Ger 4. In 2000: Net 3 5, Swe 5.5, Ger 5, UK 3, Ger 3.5. In 2001: Net 2.5, Swe 6.5, Fra 5, UK 3, Ger 3.5.

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THE LINE GRAPH BELOW REPRESENTS THE PERCENTAGE OF EMPLOYEES IN 5 DIFFERENT NATIONS IN EUROPE WITH A DAY OR MORE SICK OFF BETWEEN 1992 TO 2001, WITH THE Y-AXIS PRESENTING THE PERCENTAGE OF THE WORKERS AND THE YEARS ON THE X-AXIS.

OVERALL, NETHERLANDS HAS THE HIGHEST PERCENTAGE OF WORKERS ABSENT DUE TO ILLNESS, WITH THE HIGHEST PERCENTAGE RECORDER AT 6% IN 1992 AND 2001 ACCORDINGLY. GERMANY AND UK REMAIN ALMOST STABLE THROUGH OUT THE YEARS WITH THE PERCENTAGE REPRESENTED AT 2% AND 1 % RESPECTIVELY.

IN 1992, THE HIGHEST PERCENTAGE WAS REPRESENTED BY BOTH NETHERLANDS AND SWEDEN. THE PERCENTAGE SPIKED TO 6% FOR NETHERLANDS WHILE IT DECREASED STEADILY WITH OVER THE YEARS.

NOTABLY, FRANCE REMAINED STABLE BETWEEN 1991 TO 1995 AND THE PERCENTAGE INCREASED TREMENDOUSLY WITHIN THE YEARS RECORDING A 5% IN 2001. BOTH GERMANY AND UK HAD THE LOWEST PERCENTAGE REPRESENTATION WITHIN THE YEARS WHICH REMAINED STABLE BETWEEN 2 AND SLIGHTLY ABOVE 1% RESPECTIVELY. EQUALLY BY 2001 THERE IS A PERCANTAGE DECLINE FOR SWEDEN, UK AND GERMANY WHILE FRANCE AND NERTHERLANDS HAVE THE HIGHEST PRESENTATION.

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The report attempts to address the task but contains significant inaccuracies and omissions. It misidentifies the time period (starting from 1992 instead of 1991) and provides incorrect data for key countries (e.g., Netherlands' peak, UK and Germany's percentages). The overview is misleading, and the description of trends is often vague or incorrect. To improve, ensure accurate data representation, provide a clear and correct overview, and describe trends for all countries with specific figures. Avoid irrelevant or inaccurate statements.

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The report has a basic structure with an introduction and an overview, but the organization is unclear and the progression of ideas is difficult to follow. The overview is inaccurate and does not provide a clear summary of the main trends. The body paragraphs lack logical grouping of information, and the use of cohesive devices is limited and sometimes incorrect. The report would benefit from a clearer paragraph structure, with each paragraph focusing on a specific trend or group of countries, and from using a range of linking words and phrases to connect ideas smoothly.

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The vocabulary used is limited and repetitive, with some inappropriate word choices (e.g., 'sick off', 'recorder', 'presentation', 'percantage'). There is an attempt to use some less common words (e.g., 'spiked', 'tremendously'), but these are not always used accurately. The report would benefit from a wider range of precise vocabulary related to trends (e.g., 'fluctuated', 'peaked', 'declined gradually') and from more accurate and natural collocations. Additionally, the use of capital letters throughout the report is inappropriate and should be corrected.

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The report contains numerous grammatical errors and punctuation issues that significantly affect clarity. There are problems with subject-verb agreement, verb tense consistency, and sentence structure. For example, 'the highest percentage recorder at 6%' should be 'the highest percentage recorded at 6%', and 'it decreased steadily with over the years' is incorrect. The report also lacks a range of sentence structures, relying mostly on simple sentences. To improve, the writer should focus on using a variety of complex and compound sentences, ensuring correct verb forms and tenses, and using punctuation accurately.

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