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Band 6+: The graph below shows the unemployment rates in the US and Japan between March 1993 and March 1999.

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The image displays a line graph comparing the unemployment rates in the US and Japan from March 1993 to March 1999. The US rate starts at 7%, declines to 4.5% by March 1995, then fluctuates slightly before reaching 4% in March 1999. Japan's rate begins at 2.5%, rises steadily to 4.5% by March 1998, and then increases sharply to 5% in March 1999.

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The proportion of unemployment is depicted in the line chart below in America and Japan over 60 years. It is clear from the graph that both countries’ percentages were going in the opposite direction.

According to what is shown, the USA and Japan had started at around 7% and 2.5% respectively. As there was a significant dip in the unemployment ratio in the USA during the first three years, there was a gradual climb in Japan’s ratio.

Thereafter the USA’s proportion fluctuated wildly at about 5.5 percent until nearly the beginning of 1997, while the proportion in Japan was increasing in the same period. Consequently the two countries’ ratio continued its usual behavior until March-1999 when Japan exceeded the USA at about 4.5% and 4% respectively.

To sum up, we could say that the number of unemployed people increased for Japan and dropped for America throughout the period until 1999 when Japan was almost 0.5 percent more than the USA.

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Task Response

The report addresses the task, describing the main trends in unemployment rates for the US and Japan between 1993 and 1999. However, there are some inaccuracies and omissions. For instance, the time frame is incorrectly stated as '60 years' instead of 6 years. While the general trends are captured, more specific data points could be included to enhance the description. To improve, ensure accuracy in data reporting and provide more specific details about the fluctuations and key turning points in the graph.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is generally coherent, but the organization could be improved. The use of cohesive devices is adequate but could be more sophisticated to enhance the flow of information. Consider using more varied transition words and phrases to connect ideas between sentences and paragraphs. The phrase "usual behavior" is vague and doesn't provide a clear connection to the data.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate but lacks sophistication. There are instances of imprecise word choice, such as "proportion" instead of "rate" or "percentage." While the vocabulary is generally accurate, expanding the range of vocabulary related to trends and comparisons would improve the report. For example, instead of "going in the opposite direction," you could use phrases like "diverging trends" or "contrasting patterns."

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates a fair range of grammatical structures, but there are noticeable errors that affect clarity. For example, "over 60 years" is inaccurate and should be corrected to reflect the actual time frame. The sentence structure is generally simple, and incorporating more complex sentences would enhance the grammatical range. Pay closer attention to punctuation, especially commas and apostrophes, to improve accuracy.

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