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Band 5+: The graph below shows the weekly working hours or men and women omen in in government institutions and private institutions. Summarise the information by selecting and repairing the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image presents four pie charts depicting weekly working hours segmented by gender and employment sector, specifically Government and Private. For Government sector men: 2-15 hours (9%), 16-30 hours (15%), 31-45 hours (25%), and Over 46 hours (51%). For Government sector women: 1-2 hours (12%), 6-12 hours (18%), 16-30 hours (27%), 31-45 hours (32%), and Over 46 hours (11%). For Private sector men: 1-2 hours (5%), 6-12 hours (15%), 13-30 hours (20%), Over 46 hours (30%), and 31-45 hours (30%). For Private sector women: 1-2 hours (10%), 6-12 hours (35%), 13-30 hours (30%), 31-45 hours (25%), and Over 46 hours (0%).

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The pie charts compare the weekly hours of men and women who worked in government and private institutions.

Overall, it is clear that regarding government sector for men, the highest amount of hours worked by themselves, while women worked the least. Similarly, in private sector, men worked higher than women.

Looking first at the government sector, 30% men worked over 46 hours, whereas 4% of women worked, at over 46 hours. The figure for men, 23% of men worked 1-2 hours and 6-12 hours respectively, while 18% and 35 of women worked same as the men. For both 9% of men and 23% of women worked the same hours, at 13-30 hours. Moreover, 15% of man worked, at 31-45 hours, while the corresponding figure for women, at 31-40 hours.

Turning to the private sector, 34% of men worked over 46 hours, followed by 21%, at 13-30 hours, 20% at 31-45 hours. Furthermore, 5% and 20% of men worked the least hours, at 1-2 hours and 6-12 hours respectively. By contrast, 20% of women worked the largest amount of hours, at 31-45 hours, whereas 4% of women worked, at over 46 hours. Moreover, 20% of women worked, at 13-30 hours, while the corresponding figures for 21% and 35%, at 1-2 hours and 6-12 hours respectively.

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hours: 21

worked: 15

women: 9

sector: 4

while: 4

government: 3

private: 3

respectively: 3

13-30: 3

31-45: 3

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Task Response

The report attempts to address the task by describing the main features of the charts and making some comparisons. However, there are significant inaccuracies in the data (e.g., government men over 46 hours is stated as 30% instead of 51%, and private women over 46 hours is stated as 4% instead of 0%). Additionally, some categories are mislabeled (e.g., '31-40 hours' instead of '31-45 hours'), and the report omits key data points (e.g., government women's 31-45 hours and 16-30 hours). The structure is clear, but the frequent data errors detract from the overall task achievement. To improve, ensure all figures are accurately reported and that the summary covers all main categories with correct comparisons.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a logical structure with an introduction, an overview, and paragraphs for each sector. However, the flow is sometimes disrupted by unclear referencing and awkward phrasing (e.g., 'the highest amount of hours worked by themselves'). The overview is too brief and does not clearly summarize the main trends. Cohesive devices are used but not always effectively, and some sentences are confusing due to incorrect data presentation. To improve, ensure each paragraph has a clear central idea and use linking words to smoothly connect comparisons.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate for the task, with some attempts at paraphrasing (e.g., 'the corresponding figure'). However, there is limited range and flexibility. Some word choices are imprecise or awkward (e.g., 'the highest amount of hours worked by themselves', 'worked the least'). To achieve a higher score, use a wider variety of precise terms (e.g., 'proportion', 'percentage', 'substantial majority', 'minority') and ensure collocations are natural (e.g., 'worked the most hours' instead of 'worked higher'). Pay attention to vocabulary repetition to improve the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report uses a mix of simple and complex sentences, but there are several grammatical errors and punctuation issues that affect clarity. Examples include missing articles ('the highest amount of hours'), incorrect verb forms ('35 of women' instead of '35% of women'), and inconsistent tense usage. Some sentences are incomplete or confusing (e.g., 'while the corresponding figure for women, at 31-40 hours'). To improve, proofread for subject-verb agreement, use correct percentages, and ensure each sentence is grammatically complete. Varying sentence structures and using more complex constructions accurately will also enhance the score.

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