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Band 4+: The graph belowe shows the amount of money four different organisations received from public donations between 1970 and 2010.

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The image displays a line graph showing the amount of money in euro millions received by four organisations from 1970 to 2010. Organisation A received: 1970, €4.0M; 1980, €3.5M; 1990, €2.3M; 2000, €1.0M; 2010, €0.5M. Organisation B received: 1970, €1.2M; 1980, €1.0M; 1990, €1.8M; 2000, €1.7M; 2010, €2.3M. Organisation C received: 1970, €0.5M; 1980, €0.5M; 1990, €3.0M; 2000, €3.5M; 2010, €1.0M. Organisation D received: 1970, €0.2M; 1980, €0.2M; 1990, €0.2M; 2000, €5.0M; 2010, €4.3M.

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Companies often invest in organizations that align with their views whcih can bring a positive image towards the company. And this graph shows the amount of monetary amount received by the aforementioned organizations.

In the Year 1970, it is shown that there is a significant amount in donations towards organization A, as it shows that it is outperforming every other organization that did not obtain as much money. However, by the year 1980, the rest of the organizations, with the exception of D, seem to have reached a pivoting point in the number of donations received, albeit it is not until the year 1990 that company D will have a surge in coin invested in it.

Although, once a remarkable rival in business, it appears to be that most monetary intervention towards company A is coming to a halt by the year 2000, while C and D show to have a promising rise in donations.

Finally, by the year 210 C and A have received the last of their donations, while D and B seem to remain stable.

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company: 3

amount: 3

received: 3

donations: 3

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Task Response

The report struggles to meet the requirements of an academic Task 1 response. The introduction includes irrelevant commentary regarding company views and images, which should be avoided in a data description task. The report fails to provide a clear overview of the main trends and lacks specific data (numerical values) to support the descriptions. Additionally, there are several inaccuracies, such as referring to the organizations as 'companies' and a typographical error regarding the final year ('210'). To improve, focus on objectively describing the trends shown in the graph, include specific figures from the visual description, and ensure the overview summarizes the overall movement of the data without adding external opinions.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report suffers from several issues regarding logical flow and structure. The introduction includes irrelevant commentary about company views and images, which is inappropriate for a Task 1 report; you should focus strictly on describing the data. The use of cohesive devices is sometimes awkward (e.g., starting a sentence with 'And' or using 'Although' incorrectly as a transition). To improve, ensure each paragraph has a clear purpose: an introduction (paraphrasing the prompt), an overview (summarizing main trends), and body paragraphs (detailing specific data). Avoid personal opinions or external context.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is often imprecise or used in an unnatural way for a data report. Terms like 'coin invested', 'monetary intervention', and 'remarkable rival in business' are not suitable for describing statistical trends in a line graph. Additionally, there are spelling errors such as 'whcih'. Aim to use standard academic reporting vocabulary, such as 'increased significantly', 'fluctuated', 'remained steady', or 'declined'. Avoid metaphorical language and stick to descriptive, quantitative terms.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are significant grammatical issues that affect clarity. The sentence starting with 'Although...' is a fragment and lacks a main clause. Tense usage is inconsistent, switching between present and future ('will have a surge') in a way that does not suit a report about past years. There are also errors in phrasing, such as 'the amount of monetary amount'. To improve, practice using the past simple tense for completed historical data and work on complex sentence structures that correctly use subordinating conjunctions like 'while', 'whereas', and 'although'.

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