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Band 4+: The graph shows the number of UK adolescents following a vegetarian diet. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.

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The image shows a line graph of UK adolescents following a vegetarian diet from 1980 to 2020 per 100,000 individuals, starting in 1980 at approximately 1.6 individuals, remaining relatively stable until an increase around 1995 peaking at around 3.6, then fluctuating below 3 until about 2010, followed by a sharp rise from 3.5 in 2015 to 9.5 in 2020.

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The graph illustrates the quantity of UK adolescents practicing vegetarian diet. There was taken data from 1900’s to 2020′. On the left were given numbers of individuals by hundred thousands. It is noticeable, that the majority of graph has a stable tendency. However, closer to 2015 showed sharp increase.

It is clearly visible, that from 1900 to 2015 the line does not fluctuate hardly, staying on 200,000-300,000 people. During 1995 to 2000 the line graph slightly raised from 200,000 to 400,000 individuals. Afterwards the line has decreased to previous values.

In 2015 happened dramatic increase of vegetarians among teenagers. Illustrated the grow spurt from 200,000 to approximately 950,000. It was the most drastic spike since 1990 and demonstrated maximum value

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The report covers the main trends in the graph, noting the stability and the sharp increase. To improve, ensure that the data is more accurate and pay attention to the time frame mentioned in the introduction. Also, avoid using expressions like 'clearly visible' and aim for more precise language. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report lacks a clear overall structure and the paragraphing could be improved. The flow of information is not always smooth, and the connections between sentences and paragraphs need strengthening to enhance coherence. For example, the transition between the second and third paragraphs is abrupt. Consider using cohesive devices (e.g., conjunctions, pronouns, synonyms) to link ideas more effectively.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is somewhat limited and lacks precision. While the report conveys the general trend, the choice of words could be more varied and sophisticated. For instance, instead of repeatedly using 'increase,' consider using synonyms like 'rise,' 'growth,' or 'surge.' Also, the use of 'quantity' and 'practicing vegetarian diet' could be refined for better accuracy and naturalness. Focus on expanding your vocabulary related to describing trends and data. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity. There are issues with verb tense ('There was taken data'), subject-verb agreement, and article usage. Sentence structure is also quite basic, limiting the complexity of the information conveyed. For example, the phrase 'numbers of individuals by hundred thousands' is awkward and grammatically incorrect. Focus on improving your understanding and application of basic grammar rules and try to incorporate a wider range of sentence structures to enhance the overall quality of your writing.

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