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Band 4+: The graph shows the percentage of women working in 6 countries in 1960, 1970 and 1980. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting on th e main features and make comparisons where relevant

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the bar chart shows the percentage of women working in 5 different countries (UK, USA, Canada, Japan, and Germany) from 1970 to 2005.

Firstly we can see the big different between women working in Japan and Canada in 1970, around 40%.

now now tur)ning to the details in 2005 UK and Canada have a big percentage for women working it is about (60%), and USA and Germany coming sucundly for percentage about (55%) in the same year. however, japan is less one for women working in 2005 around (40%)

in 1970 we can see the top percentage for Canada about (60%) it have a same percent for both year 1970 and 2005, overall Germany coming in the sucond level around (50%),

however USA and UK have a small diffirent percentage about (5%) , finally we have a small percentage for Japan around (20%) it was lowest in both year 1970 was (20%) and in 2005 it was (40%

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The report provides a good overview of the main features of the data, but it misses some key details and comparisons. For example, it doesn't mention the significant increase in the percentage of women working in all countries between 1970 and 2005.

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The report is difficult to follow due to numerous grammatical errors and unclear sentence structure. The use of parentheses and the lack of clear transitions between paragraphs make it challenging to understand the main points.

Lexical Resource

4.5

The report uses a range of vocabulary, but some words are used incorrectly or inappropriately. The vocabulary is not always precise or sophisticated.

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3.5

The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, articles, and prepositions. These errors significantly affect the clarity and coherence of the report.

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