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Band 7+: The graph shows the percentage of women working in 6 countries in 1960, 1970 and 1980. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting on th e main features and make comparisons where relevant

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The image displays a bar graph titled "Female school leavers going into higher education" displaying percentages for 1970 and 2005 in the UK, USA, Canada, Japan, and Germany: UK shows 35% in 1970 and 55% in 2005, USA shows 50% in 1970 and 58% in 2005, Canada shows 45% in 1970 and 60% in 2005, Japan shows 20% in 1970 and 40% in 2005, Germany shows 30% in 1970 and 55% in 2005.

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The bar chart shows how many women went to higher education in five countries in 1970 and 2005.

Overall, the percentage of women studying at a higher level increased in all countries. Canada had the highest numbers, while Japan had the lowest in both years.

In 1970, Canada had about 55%, which was the highest. Germany, the USA and the UK had between 35% and 45%. Japan had the lowest number, only about 15%.

In 2005, the numbers rose in every country. Canada again was the highest with almost 60%. Germany also increased to around 55%. The UK and the USA grew to about 50%. Japan increased too, reaching around 40%, but it was still the lowest.

To sum up, all five countries had more women going into higher education in 2005 than in 1970.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

women: 3

higher: 3

countries: 3

increased: 3

canada: 3

highest: 3

japan: 3

about: 3

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Task Response

The report covers the main trends and makes relevant comparisons. However, there are some inaccuracies in the data reported (e.g., Canada's 1970 percentage, and percentages for other countries). To improve, ensure greater accuracy in data reporting and avoid approximations where possible. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is well-organized and easy to follow. The information is presented logically, with a clear overview, detailed descriptions, and a concise summary. The use of cohesive devices is natural and effective, contributing to the overall clarity of the report.

Lexical Resource

The report demonstrates a strong command of vocabulary. A wide range of vocabulary is used accurately and appropriately. The language used is precise and effectively conveys the information presented in the graph. Pay attention to vocabulary repetition to improve the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report exhibits excellent grammatical control. A variety of sentence structures are used accurately and effectively. There are virtually no grammatical errors or phrasing issues, indicating a high level of proficiency.

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