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Band 4+: The graph shows the results of a survey of British public figures that people can recognise from their photographs. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

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The image is a bar graph depicting recognition of a person in a photo by age. The horizontal axis shows percentages ranging from 0 to 100%, and the vertical axis lists four categories: Queen, Prime Minister, Chancellor, and Mayor of London. There are four bars for each category, representing age groups 0-20, 21-40, 41-60, and 61-older. The Queen has the highest recognition, with all age groups above 90%, except for 0-20 at approximately 85%. Prime Minister recognition is also high, with the 61-older group at nearly 100%, 41-60 around 90%, 21-40 near 80%, and 0-20 just above 60%. Chancellor recognition is lower, with 61-older around 65%, 41-60 near 55%, 21-40 approximately 45%, and 0-20 just below 20%. Mayor of London has varied recognition, with 61-older at nearly 70%, 41-60 around 60%, 21-40 just above 40%, and 0-20 at approximately 35%.

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The graph shows the results of a survey conducted on British public figures that common people can recognize according to age from the photographs.

The photo of British queen was one of the most recoganised one and the least belonged to the mayer of london from the varying dagree aged groups.

Among the age group of 0-20, around 25 percent of people were able to tell the photo of queen and half of this figure, 50 percent accounted for the Prime Minister. further, only 20 percent remained successful to recognise the photo of chancellor as well as Mayor of London. In case of 21 to 61 and older age group people, all 100 percent were able to complete the task when comes to the photo of Queen. But 40 percent of people from 21-40 age group in the Prime Minister turn, 30 in Chancellor and double of it belonged to Mayer of London was 60 percent. The percentage dropped significantly for the 41-60 age group, for all the British figures – such as 90, 70, and 60 percent for the Prime Minister, Chancellor, and Mayor of London. The old age group between 61 and older, Prime Minister recognised by 65 percent, which rebounded to 70 percent for Chancellor and again dropped to 40 for the Mayor of London.

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Overall Band Score

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

percent: 9

london: 5

group: 5

people: 4

photo: 4

prime: 4

minister: 4

chancellor: 4

british: 3

queen: 3

mayor: 3

Try using synonyms for the above words

Task Response

The report attempts to address the task by describing the survey results, but it contains significant inaccuracies and misinterpretations of the data. Key figures are incorrectly reported (e.g., the Queen's recognition for the 0-20 age group is stated as 25% instead of approximately 85%), and some comparisons are unclear or misleading. The structure lacks a clear overview, and the writing contains spelling and grammatical errors that affect clarity. To improve, focus on accurately presenting the main trends, such as the Queen having the highest recognition across all age groups, and ensure comparisons are logical and supported by the data. Proofreading for spelling and grammar is also recommended.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report attempts to describe the data but the flow of information is often disrupted by unclear phrasing and awkward transitions. The structure could be improved by logically grouping age groups and figures, and by using clearer linking words to guide the reader. For example, the description jumps between age groups without a clear pattern, making it hard to follow. Consider organizing the report by first giving an overview of the highest and lowest recognition, then systematically comparing the figures for each age group or each public figure.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is limited and sometimes inaccurate (e.g., 'recoganised', 'mayer', 'dagree', 'tell the photo'). There is some attempt to vary word choice, but it is not always appropriate or natural. To improve, use more precise and formal language, such as 'recognized', 'Mayor', 'degree', and 'identify the photograph'. Also, avoid informal phrases like 'comes to' and aim for a wider range of synonyms for describing data (e.g., 'accounted for', 'represented', 'constituted').

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors and awkward constructions that affect clarity. Examples include subject-verb agreement issues ('people was'), incorrect prepositions ('according to age from the photographs'), and missing articles ('the photo of queen'). Punctuation is also inconsistent, such as missing capital letters for proper nouns and incorrect use of commas. To improve, focus on sentence structure, ensure subject-verb agreement, and proofread for basic errors. Using a mix of simple and complex sentences correctly would enhance the overall quality.

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