Bar Chart

Band 7+: The graph shows the share of unemployed people aged between 15 and 24 in five European countries in 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

See all user-written answers on this topic

Image for topic: The graph shows the share of unemployed people aged between 15 and 24 in five European countries in 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Our system will evaluate the answer based on this AI-generated description.

The image features a bar graph displaying unemployment rates for individuals aged 15-24 versus overall unemployment in five European countries for 2005. Poland's youth unemployment is approximately 38% versus an overall rate of around 18%. Italy's figures are about 24% for the youth and 8% overall. Hungary shows roughly 20% youth unemployment compared to 8% overall. Germany's youth rate is approximately 15% versus 10% overall. Denmark displays around 12% for youth and 5% overall.

Given the complexity of the image, the above description may not be entirely accurate.

Skyrocket your IELTS band score by 1-2 points in under a month with our premium plan!

Check it out

Note: Both the topic and the answer were created by one of our users.

The bar chart compares the proportion of unemployed individuals aged between 15 and 24 in five different European countries, as well as their overall unemployment rates (Poland, Italy, Hungary, Germany, and Denmark).

Overall, unemployed young adults recorded higher figures than overall unemployment, while the opposite pattern could be observed in the latter category.

Turning to details, in Poland, the percentage of individuals aged 15-24 led the chart with the largest figure (40%), which reached its peak level. Meanwhile, Italy recorded the second-highest proportion with approximately 27%. As for Hungary and Germany, unemployed people exhibited a similar patterns, with about 24% and roughly 22%, respectively. However, Denmark recorded the lowest percentage with just above 10% compared to other countries.

Overall, unemployed individuals in Poland recorded the highest figure compared to other nations. In comparison, there was a pronounced gap between Germany and Denmark, with 20% in the first country and around 8% in the second one. Hungary and Italy exhibited similar patterns with 15% and nearly 12%.

Word Count: 166

Check Your Answer On This Topic?

Check My Answer

Generate A Band-9 Sample Answer?

Generate A Sample

Overall Band Score

7.5

(+/- 0.5)

Vocabulary Complexity:
C2 - Complex
Continue to challenge and refine your language choices.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

unemployed: 4

recorded: 4

individuals: 3

italy: 3

hungary: 3

germany: 3

Try using synonyms for the above words

Task Response

The report effectively addresses the task by comparing youth unemployment across the five countries and providing an overall summary. However, there are some inaccuracies in the data (e.g., Poland at 40% instead of 38%, Italy at 27% instead of 24%, Hungary at 24% instead of 20%, Germany at 22% instead of 15%, and Denmark at 10% instead of 12%). Additionally, the second paragraph's overall statement is somewhat unclear and could be more precise. The report also omits the overall unemployment rates for each country, which are part of the visual information. To improve, ensure data accuracy and include all relevant comparisons, such as the relationship between youth and overall unemployment rates.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is generally well-organized and easy to follow, with a clear overall structure. However, the second paragraph introduces an 'overall' statement that is somewhat confusing and not fully developed, and the final paragraph repeats the word 'overall' and presents data that seems to mix youth and overall unemployment rates, which may cause slight confusion. The use of cohesive devices is adequate, but the flow could be improved by more clearly separating the description of youth unemployment from the overall rates, and by ensuring that each paragraph has a distinct focus.

Lexical Resource

The report uses a good range of vocabulary appropriate for the task, such as 'proportion', 'recorded', 'led the chart', 'reached its peak level', and 'pronounced gap'. There is some repetition of 'recorded' and 'overall', and a few imprecise phrases like 'the opposite pattern could be observed in the latter category' which is unclear. The lexical choices are generally accurate, but more variety and precision would enhance the report.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates a good range of grammatical structures with mostly accurate usage. There are minor errors, such as 'a similar patterns' (should be 'similar patterns') and a few awkward phrasings, but these do not impede understanding. The overall grammar is strong, and the report would benefit from minor corrections to achieve full accuracy.

The chart below gives information about the growth of urban population in certain parts of the world including the prediction the future. of

The chart demonstrates the information abouth the urban population group growth of the universe such as Whole World, Africa, Asia, Latin America by years of 1950,2000, and 2030 Among the resutls Latin America came as most people live in city and will live in urbanization most . in 1950 their percentage started as biggest already […]

Band 4+

The chart below shows the expenditure on three categories among different age groups of residents in the UK in 2004

The chart illustrates citizens’ expenditure on three certain categories in five different age groups in Britain in 2004. In conclusion, citizens’ spending on food and drink witnessed an upward trend as the age grew. By comparison, the expenditure on restaurant and hotel decreased overall. As the age groups get older, citizens’ budgets on entertainment climbed […]

Band 5+

Task 01: Bar Chart The chart below shows waste collection by a recycling centre from 2011 to 2015 Waste collected by a recycling centre (tons of waste)

The bar chart compared the waste collection by a recycling centre from 2011 to 2015. Overall, all types of waste fluctuated, with paper having the highest figure at the end of the period, while garden had the lowest. At the begining of the period, 57 tons of paper were collected by a recycling centre, which […]

Band 7+

The bar chart shows shares of expenditures for five major categories in the USA, Canada, the UK and Japan in 2009. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart illustrates the percentage of expenditure for food, housing, transportation, health care and clothing in the US, Canada, the UK and Japan. overall, food and housing expenses were majority expenses. Clothing and health care accounted for a fewer pie. For the food expenditure, in Japan, it accounted for just around 23 percent. In […]

Band 5+

the graph shows the percentages of people going to the cinemas in a European country on different days

The bar chart illustrates days of week and the proportion of people going to cinemas in a European country in 2003, 2005 and 2007. Overall, the percentage of people on the first 4 days was under a quarter, whereas on Friday people showed the same proprtion. Meanwhile, Saturday demonstrated the most significant percentage in comparison […]

Band 7+

See All

Band 7+: The graph shows the share of unemployed people aged between 15 and 24 in five European countries in 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Check Your Answer On This Topic?

Generate A Band-9 Sample Answer?

Overall Band Score

Task Response

Coherence & Cohesion

Lexical Resource

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Other Topics:

The chart below gives information about the growth of urban population in certain parts of the world including the prediction the future. of

The chart below shows the expenditure on three categories among different age groups of residents in the UK in 2004

Task 01: Bar Chart The chart below shows waste collection by a recycling centre from 2011 to 2015 Waste collected by a recycling centre (tons of waste)

The bar chart shows shares of expenditures for five major categories in the USA, Canada, the UK and Japan in 2009. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

the graph shows the percentages of people going to the cinemas in a European country on different days

The chart below shows the spending (in millions) by 18-20 year olds in one country on five different products in 2010 and 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

Check Your Answer On This Topic?

Generate A Band-9 Sample Answer?

Overall Band Score

Task Response

Coherence & Cohesion

Lexical Resource

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Other Topics:

Plans & Pricing

Free

Premium