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Band 4+: The graphs below show the number of medals won by the top five countries in the summer and winter Olympics. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image consists of two bar charts depicting the highest ranking medal winners of all time in the Winter and Summer Olympics. The Winter Olympics chart displays Norway with approximately 368 medals (132 gold, 125 silver, 111 bronze), the United States with around 305 medals (105 gold, 112 silver, 88 bronze), Germany with approximately 240 medals (92 gold, 88 silver, 60 bronze), Russia with about 234 medals (81 gold, 64 silver, 89 bronze), and Canada with around 199 medals (73 gold, 64 silver, 62 bronze). The Summer Olympics chart shows the United States with over 2,500 medals (1022 gold, 795 silver, 706 bronze), Russia with around 1,865 medals (590 gold, 486 silver, 489 bronze), Germany with approximately 1,346 medals (428 gold, 444 silver, 474 bronze), Great Britain with about 883 medals (263 gold, 295 silver, 325 bronze), and France with around 780 medals (248 gold, 276 silver, 256 bronze).

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The two bar graphs illustrate how many medals were won in water olympics in five country (Norway, US, Germany, Russia, and Canada) as well as the amount of medals in summer olympics in five country (US, Russia Germany, France, Great Britain). The medals are given in gold, silver, and bronze.

Overall, The Norway was the highest ranking medal winners in winter olympics over the period given whereas US was the most medal winners in summer olympics.

In terms of winter olympics, Canada was the lowest ranking gold medal winners at under 100 as opposed to Russia exhibited at least ranking silver medal winners to about 70. Furthermore, the Norway medal winners displayed maximum ranking bronze medal victors to approximately 100.

On the other hand, in summer olympics, France was the minimum ranking medal to above 500. However, Russia’s medal winners was higher than Germany (around 1800 and 1600 medals respectively). Lastly, France showed fewest ranking medal champion to below 500.

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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

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medal: 9

ranking: 6

winners: 6

olympics: 5

medals: 4

germany: 3

russia: 3

summer: 3

france: 3

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Task Response

The report attempts to address the task but contains several inaccuracies and omissions. It misidentifies the Olympics as 'water olympics' and incorrectly lists the countries for the Summer Olympics (omitting Great Britain and France, and misstating the countries). The overall trend is correctly identified, but the specific data provided is often vague or incorrect (e.g., 'under 100' for Canada's gold medals, 'about 70' for Russia's silver medals, and 'above 500' for France's total medals). The report also fails to mention key details such as the total medal counts for most countries and the breakdown of gold, silver, and bronze for the Summer Olympics. To improve, ensure accurate identification of the charts, include all relevant countries and data, and provide a clearer comparison of the medal distributions.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a basic structure with an introduction and separate paragraphs for winter and summer Olympics, but the flow is disrupted by unclear references and awkward phrasing. The overall message is difficult to follow in places due to imprecise language and lack of clear linking between ideas. To improve, use clearer topic sentences, ensure each paragraph focuses on a single main idea, and employ a range of cohesive devices (e.g., 'in contrast', 'similarly', 'while') to guide the reader. Also, avoid vague expressions like 'exhibited at least ranking' and 'minimum ranking medal' as they confuse the reader.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is limited and often used inaccurately. There are issues with word choice (e.g., 'water olympics' instead of 'Winter Olympics', 'medal winners' instead of 'medals won'), and the phrasing is not natural or precise. The report lacks the range and sophistication expected for a high band score. To improve, expand your vocabulary for describing data (e.g., 'ranked highest', 'secured the most medals', 'trailed behind', 'outperformed') and use precise terms like 'approximately', 'just over', 'nearly'. Practice using collocations correctly, such as 'the highest number of medals' or 'the leading country'. Pay attention to vocabulary repetition to improve the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors and punctuation issues that impede clarity. There are subject-verb agreement errors (e.g., 'Russia's medal winners was'), incorrect pluralization ('five country'), and missing articles ('the Norway'). Sentence structures are repetitive and often incomplete or unclear. To improve, focus on mastering basic grammar rules, such as subject-verb agreement, article usage, and plural forms. Practice writing a variety of sentence structures, including complex sentences with subordinate clauses, and ensure each sentence is complete and correctly punctuated. Reviewing your work for common errors before submission would also be beneficial.

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