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Band 8+: The graphs below show the primary social networking websites of British users in 2010 and projected figures for 2018.

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The image contains two pie charts comparing social network usage by British users, one for 2010 and the other for 2018. The 2010 chart shows the following percentages: Facebook (44.3%), Twitter (10.24%), Pinterest (16.5%), Google Plus (18.3%), Bebo (8.17%). The 2018 chart displays the following percentages: Facebook (72.4%), Twitter (17.3%), Pinterest (7.2%), Google Plus (2.9%), Bebo (0%).

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he pie charts display the main social networks for users in England, Wales and Scotland in 2010 and predicted numbers for 2018.

Overall, Facebook had the biggest market share in 2010 and this is expected to grow even more in the future. Twitter will continue to be significant in 2018 with only a small decline, but all others will fall to minimal levels.

In 2010 Facebook had nearly half of the overall share and this is set to increase to nearly three quarters of the total in 2018. The next biggest website was Twitter with nearly a fifth in 2010 and it is predicted that this will remain the second biggest network, with only around a 1% drop.

Pinterest is set to become the biggest loser with a loss of nearly 10%, from 16.95% to 7.25%. It is thought that Google Plus will become the least used social network in 2018 with a drop of nearly 8% to just 2.9%. Despite Bebo being used by nearly a tenth of British users in 2010 it is projected to disappear completely by 2018.

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Task Response

The report effectively addresses the task by providing an overview and detailed comparisons of the data. It correctly identifies the main trends, such as Facebook's dominance and growth, and the decline of other networks. However, there are some inaccuracies in the data (e.g., Twitter's share is described as 'nearly a fifth' when it is actually 10.24%, and the decline is stated as 'around a 1% drop' but it actually increases to 17.3%). Additionally, the report omits the exact figures for some data points and misstates the percentage for Pinterest in 2010. To improve, ensure all data is accurately reported and avoid vague descriptions. The structure is clear, but the language could be more precise.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is well-organized with a clear introduction, overview, and detailed paragraphs. The progression of ideas is logical, and the use of cohesive devices is generally effective. To achieve a perfect score, ensure that all references are clear and that the flow between sentences is seamless. For example, in the second paragraph, the phrase 'this is set to increase' could be more explicitly linked to Facebook's share. Overall, the structure is strong and easy to follow.

Lexical Resource

The report demonstrates a good range of vocabulary appropriate for the task, with effective use of synonyms and paraphrasing (e.g., 'market share', 'overall share', 'biggest loser'). The language is generally precise and natural. To reach a higher band, consider using more sophisticated and varied expressions, such as 'projected to surge' or 'anticipated to decline significantly', and ensure that all terms are used accurately (e.g., 'nearly a fifth' is slightly imprecise for 10.24%, but this is a minor issue). Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report shows a good range of grammatical structures, including complex sentences and appropriate use of passive voice (e.g., 'it is predicted that'). Punctuation and grammar are largely accurate, with only minor lapses. To achieve a higher score, aim for more variety in sentence structures and ensure that all comparisons are grammatically precise. For instance, 'with only around a 1% drop' could be rephrased as 'with a marginal decline of approximately 1%' for greater sophistication.

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