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The image contains two pie charts comparing social network usage by British users, one for 2010 and the other for 2018. The 2010 chart shows the following percentages: Facebook (44.3%), Twitter (10.24%), Pinterest (16.5%), Google Plus (18.3%), Bebo (8.17%). The 2018 chart displays the following percentages: Facebook (72.4%), Twitter (17.3%), Pinterest (7.2%), Google Plus (2.9%), Bebo (0%).

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The pie charts display the main social networks for users in England, Wales and Scotland in 2010 and predicted numbers for 2018.

Overall, Facebook had the biggest market share in 2010 and this is expected to grow even more in the future. Twitter will continue to be significant in 2018 with only a small decline, but all others will fall to minimal levels.

In 2010 Facebook had nearly half of the overall share and this is set to increase to nearly three quarters of the total in 2018. The next biggest website was Twitter with nearly a fifth in 2010 and it is predicted that this will remain the second biggest network, with only around a 1% drop.

Pinterest is set to become the biggest loser with a loss of nearly 10%, from 16.95% to 7.25%. It is thought that Google Plus will become the least used social network in 2018 with a drop of nearly 8% to just 2.9%. Despite Bebo being used by nearly a tenth of British users in 2010 it is projected to disappear completely by 2018.

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The report effectively addresses the task by describing the main trends and comparing the data between the two years. The overall structure is clear, with an introduction, an overview, and detailed paragraphs. However, there are some inaccuracies in the data (e.g., Twitter's share in 2010 is described as 'nearly a fifth' but it was 10.24%, and the decline is described as a 'small decline' when it actually increases to 17.3%). Additionally, the report mentions 'users in England, Wales and Scotland' which is a slight deviation from the task's 'British users'. To improve, ensure data descriptions are precise and avoid introducing unnecessary details. The overview could also be more balanced by noting the projected growth of Twitter rather than a decline.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is well-structured and easy to follow. The overview is clear, and the body paragraphs logically compare the data for 2010 and 2018. The use of cohesive devices is effective and natural. To achieve a perfect score, consider using more varied linking phrases to connect ideas between sentences and paragraphs.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is appropriate and demonstrates a good range, with terms like 'market share', 'significant', 'minimal levels', and 'biggest loser'. The phrasing is generally natural and precise. To reach a band 9, you could incorporate more sophisticated and varied vocabulary, such as 'dominant', 'projected to', 'decline', or 'diminish', and avoid repetition of words like 'biggest'. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The grammar is largely accurate, and a variety of sentence structures are used, including complex sentences with clauses. Punctuation is correct throughout. To achieve a band 9, aim for even greater structural variety, such as using inversion or more complex conditional structures, and ensure flawless accuracy in all areas.

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