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Band 4+: The information below is about how full hotels were in a town in the tourist season, te chart shows the numbers of rooms occupied in each hotel. The list shows factor t may have affected how full the hotels were.

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The image contains a bar chart and a list of factors, displaying the percentage of rooms occupied in June, July, and August for three hotels: Park Hotel, Lakeside Hotel, and Hotel Lux. In June: Park Hotel 45%, Lakeside Hotel 40%, Hotel Lux 35%; in July: Park Hotel 85%, Lakeside Hotel 75%, Hotel Lux 60%; in August: Park Hotel 70%, Lakeside Hotel 80%, Hotel Lux 75%. Listed factors are: June 4th-8th, train strike; July 3rd-12th, Arts Festival; July 28th, fire in Lakeside Hotel; August 15th-19th, regional sports championships.

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The chart illustrates the percentage of rooms occupied of three different hotels during several events.

Overall, the hayday of chart occured in Hotel Lux in July, however, minimum point was in August in Lakeside Hotel.

In June, tourists mostly did not interested in visiting the train strike because the percentage of occupying rooms were low. In a contrast, in July the percentage of all hotels reached its peak with 90% in Hotel Lux, nearly 80% in Lakeside Hotel and about 75% in Park Hotel. We can consider most of tourists were interested in accidents such as Arts Festival and worst happening in that month-fire in Lakeside Hotel.

Similarly, the worst month for Lakeside Hotel was August with nearly 20% because tourists did not want to sleep at that hotel after fire.However, for Park hotel this month was the highest with the same percent as Hotel Lux with 80 percent.

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hotel: 8

lakeside: 4

percentage: 3

tourists: 3

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Task Response

The report attempts to address the task but contains significant inaccuracies in data interpretation and logical reasoning. The overview and body paragraphs misread the data points (for example, stating Hotel Lux peaked at 90% in July when the data shows 60%, and claiming Lakeside Hotel's lowest point was in August when it was actually in June). Additionally, the report makes speculative claims about tourist behavior - such as tourists being 'interested in accidents' - which is inappropriate for an academic report. To improve, focus on accurately reporting the numbers provided in the visual and avoid interpreting the 'why' behind the data unless it is explicitly stated as a fact. Ensure that the trends described (peaks and lows) align strictly with the provided figures. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The organization of ideas is somewhat logical, but the progression is hindered by awkward phrasing and unclear connections between sentences. The use of cohesive devices is limited and sometimes inaccurate (e.g., 'In a contrast'). To improve, focus on using standard transition signals such as 'In contrast,' 'Furthermore,' or 'Conversely' to link ideas more smoothly. Ensure that each paragraph has a clear central topic that relates back to the overall trends.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is often imprecise or used incorrectly, which obscures the meaning. For example, terms like 'hayday of chart' and 'worst happening' are not appropriate for an academic report. There is also a struggle with word forms (e.g., 'did not interested'). Aim to use more formal, academic synonyms for describing trends, such as 'peaked at,' 'reached a minimum,' or 'fluctuated.' Avoid using emotive or informal language like 'worst happening' or 'did not want to sleep at'.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are frequent grammatical errors that impact the readability of the report. Issues include subject-verb agreement (e.g., 'percentage... were low'), incorrect preposition usage, and sentence structure errors (e.g., 'tourists mostly did not interested'). To improve, practice constructing complex sentences using relative clauses and ensure that your verb tenses are consistent throughout the report. Pay close attention to the distinction between adjectives and verbs (e.g., 'were interested' vs 'did not interest').

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