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Band 4+: The line chart below shows the employment in the agricultural sector in four African countries (Nigeria, Kenya, South Africa, and Algeria) from 1985 to 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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Image for topic: The line chart below shows the employment in the agricultural sector in four African countries (Nigeria, Kenya, South Africa, and Algeria) from 1985 to 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image depicts a line graph with data points from 1985 to 2019 for four countries: Nigeria, Kenya, South Africa, Algeria. Nigeria: 1985-30, 1990-34, 1995-38, 2000-45, 2005-40, 2010-35, 2015-32, 2019-28; Kenya: 1985-25, 1990-27, 1995-30, 2000-32, 2005-29, 2010-27, 2015-24, 2019-22; South Africa: 1985-20, 1990-22, 1995-25, 2000-28, 2005-25, 2010-23, 2015-20, 2019-18; Algeria: 1985-15, 1990-17, 1995-18, 2000-20, 2005-19, 2010-18, 2015-15, 2019-14.

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The line graph demonstrates the number of people who work in agricultaral sector for four different African countries (Nigeria, Kenya, South Africa, and Algeria) over a 24 year.

Overall, Algeria had a smallest percantage for the graph above. Nigeria had a biggest percantage for a lot of years.

For 1985, Nigeria had a biggest percantage with a 30 percent. For the all years Nigeria also had a highest percentage with a percantage of 45. Nigeria got improvement rate between 1985-2000 and between 2000-2019 Nigeria got a downshift. Kenya had the second largest percentage rate for the graph above. In 1985, Kenya got a 28 percentage. Kenya had a increase rate for 1985-1995 and got a decrease between 1995-2019. In 1985, South Africa had a 25 percent. In 2019, South Africa had a near 18 percantage. South Africa also had a increase rate between 1985-1995 and got a decrease rate between 1995-2019. In 1985, Algeria had a 20 percentage rate. In 2019, Algeria had a 17 percentage.

Overall, the line graph above shows the downshifts and upwards for 4 different African countries.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

percantage: 5

nigeria: 5

between: 5

graph: 4

kenya: 4

south: 4

africa: 4

percentage: 4

algeria: 3

above: 3

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Task Response

The report attempts to address the task but includes some inaccuracies and lacks clear organization. The description of trends is somewhat repetitive and lacks specific details. To improve, focus on providing more precise data points and comparisons, and ensure the information is presented in a more structured and coherent manner. Also, pay attention to grammar and vocabulary to enhance clarity.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report lacks clear organization and logical flow. The information is presented in a somewhat disjointed manner, making it difficult to follow the main trends and comparisons. Consider using more cohesive devices and structuring the report into distinct paragraphs, each focusing on a specific aspect or comparison. For example, you could dedicate paragraphs to individual countries or group them based on similar trends. The overall statement at the end is very generic and doesn't add much value. Try to provide a more insightful summary of the overall trends.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is quite basic and repetitive. There is limited use of more sophisticated language to describe the trends and comparisons. For example, instead of repeatedly using 'percentage,' try to use synonyms like 'proportion,' 'share,' or 'level.' Also, the word 'downshift' is not used appropriately in this context. Expand your vocabulary related to describing trends (e.g., plateaued, fluctuated, declined sharply) to provide a more nuanced and accurate description of the data. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and misuse of articles. There are also several instances of incorrect word choice and sentence structure. For example, 'agricultaral' should be 'agricultural,' and 'smallest percantage' should be 'smallest percentage.' The sentence 'Nigeria had a biggest percantage for a lot of years' is grammatically incorrect and unclear. Focus on improving your understanding of basic grammar rules and sentence construction. Proofread carefully to identify and correct errors before submitting your report.

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