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Band 6+: The line graph and pie charts below show the percentage of the population aged between 18 and 34 years old in a country from 1978 to 2011 and the percentage of this age group of people living in different regions in 1978 and 2011. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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The image displays a line graph titled "Percentage of Population aged 18-34" and two pie charts. The line graph shows the percentage for specific years: 1978 is 35%, 1986 is approximately 37%, 1992 is approximately 38%, 1998 is approximately 34%, 2006 is approximately 32%, and 2011 is 30%. The pie chart for 1978 shows a distribution of 25% for Cities, 20% for Towns, and 55% for Rural Areas. The pie chart for 2011 shows a distribution of 65% for Cities, 30% for Towns, and 5% for Rural Areas.

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Two types of chart shown below represent the number of people aged 18-34 between 1978 and 2011 in cities, towns and rural areas.

Overall, the percentage of population aged 18-34 in cities is the highest point in the pie charts. However, the number of population in rural areas had the most decrease between 1978 and 2011, respectively.

In the pie chart shown below in 1978 there was 25% of popultaion settled in rural areas, however in 2011 there is 5% left, which signals sharp decrease. In towns, in 1978, the percentage of people aged 18-34 was 20%, on the other hand in 2011 population increased to 30%. In rural ares (1978 year) shows 55% of population percentage, it had a slight progress which made it 65% in 2011.

The graph displayed above illustrates number of people aged 18-34 in linear function between 1978 and 2011. In 1978 and 1992 table shows little upward trend from 35% to 37%, however between 1992 and 2011 the percentage of population dropped from 37% to 30%.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

population: 5

18-34: 4

between: 4

rural: 4

percentage: 4

number: 3

people: 3

however: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the task, but there are inaccuracies in the data reported from the pie charts. The structure is present, but the description of the pie charts needs improvement. To improve, ensure accurate data reporting and clearer organization of information, focusing on key trends and comparisons.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report demonstrates an adequate attempt to organize the information, but the flow could be improved. The introduction and overview are present, but the connection between sentences and paragraphs needs strengthening. Using more varied cohesive devices and transitional phrases would enhance the overall coherence. For example, clearly link the trends described in the line graph to the shifts in population distribution shown in the pie charts. Also, avoid phrases like 'Two types of chart shown below' and 'the pie chart shown below' as they are redundant.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is generally appropriate, but there's room for improvement in terms of variety and precision. Consider using more specific terms to describe the changes and trends observed in the data. For instance, instead of 'sharp decrease,' you could use 'precipitous decline.' Also, ensure that the vocabulary accurately reflects the data; for example, the population in rural areas decreased, not increased, as stated in the third paragraph. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains grammatical errors that affect clarity. Pay close attention to subject-verb agreement, correct tense usage, and accurate preposition usage. For example, 'there was 25% of population settled' should be '25% of the population was settled.' Also, review the use of articles (a, an, the) and ensure they are used correctly. Proofreading carefully for these errors will improve the grammatical accuracy.

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