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Band 7+: The line graph and pie charts below show the percentage of the population aged between 18 and 34 years old in a country from 1978 to 2011 and the percentage of this age group of people living in different regions in 1978 and 2011. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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The image displays a line graph titled "Percentage of Population aged 18-34" and two pie charts. The line graph shows the percentage for specific years: 1978 is 35%, 1986 is approximately 37%, 1992 is approximately 38%, 1998 is approximately 34%, 2006 is approximately 32%, and 2011 is 30%. The pie chart for 1978 shows a distribution of 25% for Cities, 20% for Towns, and 55% for Rural Areas. The pie chart for 2011 shows a distribution of 65% for Cities, 30% for Towns, and 5% for Rural Areas.

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The line graph illustrates the percentage of the population aged 18-34 between 1978 and 2011, while the two pie charts show the distribution across cities, towns and rural areas in 1978 and 2011.

Overall, the percentage of people aged 18 to 34 increased slightly until 1992, after which it declined steadily. The residential distribution of this age group experienced a notable change over the period. Cities becoming considerably more dominant whereas towns lose most of their share.

In 1978, young adults made up approximately 34% of the population. This number increased gradually to 36% in 1986 and increased to 37% in 1992. After that, the percentage fell slowly to 33% in 1996 and reaching at around 31% in 2006 and 30% in 2011.

Turning to the pie charts, the proportion of young adults in cities accounted for 55% in 1978, compared with 25% in towns and 20% in rural areas. By 2011, the proportion living in cities increased to 65%. Conversely, the figure for towns fell sharply to 5%, while rural areas increased moderately from 25% to 30%.21:58

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

increased: 5

cities: 4

towns: 4

percentage: 3

rural: 3

areas: 3

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Task Response

The report effectively addresses the task by summarizing the main trends in both the line graph and the pie charts, and it makes relevant comparisons. The overall structure is clear, with an introduction, an overview, and detailed paragraphs. However, there are some inaccuracies in the data (e.g., the initial percentage, the peak year, and the values for towns and rural areas in 2011), and a few grammatical issues (e.g., 'Cities becoming' and 'reaching at'). To improve, ensure that all data points are accurately reported and that sentences are grammatically complete. Additionally, the overview could be more precise in describing the changes in the pie charts.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is logically organized with a clear introduction, overview, and body paragraphs. The use of cohesive devices is generally effective, but there are minor lapses, such as the abrupt shift in the overview from the line graph to the pie charts. The paragraphing is adequate, but the second paragraph could be more clearly separated from the first. To improve, ensure that each paragraph has a clear central topic and that transitions between paragraphs are smooth.

Lexical Resource

The report uses a good range of vocabulary appropriate for the task, such as 'illustrates', 'distribution', 'dominant', and 'steadily'. There is some repetition of 'increased' and 'fell', which could be varied with synonyms like 'rose', 'climbed', 'declined', or 'dropped'. The phrasing is generally accurate, but there are a few awkward expressions, such as 'Cities becoming considerably more dominant' and 'towns lose most of their share', which could be rephrased for better clarity and formality. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates a reasonable range of grammatical structures, including complex sentences. However, there are several grammatical errors and punctuation issues that affect clarity. For example, 'Cities becoming considerably more dominant whereas towns lose most of their share' is a fragment and should be a complete sentence. Also, 'reaching at around 31%' should be 'reaching around 31%' or 'reaching approximately 31%'. The phrase 'increased to 65%' is correct, but the comparison with 1978 is not clearly stated. Additionally, there is a stray '21:58' at the end, which should be removed. To improve, proofread for subject-verb agreement, verb tense consistency, and sentence completeness.

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