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Band 5+: The line graph below shows changes in the amount and type of fast foods from 1975 to 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image depicts a line graph detailing the yearly consumption of three fast food types by Australian teenagers between 1975 and 2000: in 1975, Pizza at 5, Fish and Chips at 100, Hamburgers at 10; by 1980, Pizza at 10, Fish and Chips at approximately 85, Hamburgers at about 20; in 1985, Pizza at 20, Fish and Chips at about 80, Hamburgers at around 40; by 1990, Pizza surpassing Fish and Chips at 50, Fish and Chips dropping to about 40, and Hamburgers rising to about 82; in 1995, Pizza consumption nearing 80, Fish and Chips continuing to decline at approximately 35 times, Hamburgers reaching about 100 times per year; by 2000, Pizza reaching a plateau close to 85, Fish and Chips decreasing further to around 30, while Hamburgers plateau slightly below 100 times per year.

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The line graph illustrates a comparison of fast food consumption between 1972 and 2000 of Australian teenagers.

It can be seen that the consumption of pizza and hamburgers grew, and in 2000 hamburgers became the most popular fast food among teenagers. Also, despite fish and chips were the leaders of fast food eaten , at the end it became the least consumed.

To begin we can see that teenagers in Australia in 1975 ate 100 fih and chips per year. By 1980 the number of fish and chips eaten per year decreased to 85. Then it increased to approximately 95 until 1985 and from 1985 to 200 significantly decreased to the number of 40.

Also here illustrated that in 1975 teenagers ate pizza and hamburgers almost 10 times a year. From 1975 to 1995 the amount of eaten pizza per year dramatically increased, and was steady untill 200. While the number of hamburgers consumed per year also sharply grew , the increased more steadily, and hovered on 100 hamburgers eaten per year. We can see that in 2000 hamburgers became the most popular and consumed fast food just as fish and chips in the 1975.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

hamburgers: 6

chips: 4

eaten: 4

pizza: 3

became: 3

teenagers: 3

number: 3

increased: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the task and provides an overview of the main trends, but it contains several inaccuracies and omissions. The time period is incorrectly stated as 1972-2000 instead of 1975-2000. The description of fish and chips consumption is inconsistent: it is said to decrease to 85, then increase to 95, but the visual description indicates a steady decline from 100 to about 30. The report also omits the significant rise in pizza consumption and the crossover with fish and chips around 1990. Additionally, there are minor spelling errors (e.g., 'fih', 'untill', '200' instead of 2000). To improve, ensure accurate data reporting, correct the time frame, and provide a clearer comparison of the three foods over the entire period.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a logical structure with an introduction and body paragraphs, but the flow is sometimes disrupted by unclear referencing and abrupt transitions. For example, the phrase 'Also here illustrated that' is awkward and breaks the cohesion. The use of cohesive devices is limited and sometimes inaccurate, such as 'To begin we can see' and 'Also, despite fish and chips were the leaders...' which could be more smoothly integrated. To improve, use a wider range of linking words and phrases (e.g., 'In contrast', 'Meanwhile', 'Overall') and ensure each paragraph has a clear central idea with smooth connections between sentences.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate for the task but lacks variety and precision. There is some repetition of phrases like 'eaten per year' and 'the number of', and some word choices are informal or inaccurate (e.g., 'fih' for 'fish', 'untill' for 'until', 'hovered' which is not the best verb for a plateau). To achieve a higher score, use a wider range of synonyms (e.g., 'consumption', 'intake', 'figures') and more precise terms (e.g., 'reached a peak', 'stabilized', 'declined steadily'). Also, ensure correct spelling and word forms. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates some variety in sentence structures, but there are several grammatical errors and awkward phrasings that affect clarity. For example, 'despite fish and chips were the leaders' should be 'although fish and chips were the leaders' or 'despite being the leaders'. Also, 'the increased more steadily' is incorrect; it should be 'the increase was more steady' or 'it increased more steadily'. Punctuation issues, such as missing commas and incorrect spacing, are also present. To improve, focus on subject-verb agreement, correct use of conjunctions, and proofreading for punctuation and spelling.

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