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Band 5+: The line graph below shows the number of international tourists who visited Japan, Thailand and Vietnam between 2010 and 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image shows international tourist numbers from 2010 to 2020 for Japan, Thailand, and Vietnam: Japan in 2010 had approximately 8 million, 2012 about 10 million, 2014 around 13 million, 2016 near 20 million, 2018 roughly 28 million, and 2020 nearly 36 million; Thailand in 2010 recorded about 16 million, 2012 roughly 20 million, 2014 approximately 25 million, 2016 nearly 30 million, 2018 around 38 million, and 2020 around 40 million; Vietnam in 2010 had about 5 million, 2012 close to 7 million, 2014 roughly 9 million, 2016 about 11 million, 2018 approximately 15 million, and 2020 nearly 20 million.

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The graph above shows the number of international tourists who visited Japan, Thailand, and Vietnam from year 2010 to 2020. Among the 3 countries, Japan shows an increasing amount of international tourist over the past 10 years. Followed by Thailand, and last Vietnam.

As presented on the graph above, Japan tourists shows a gradual increase up until year 2016. Significant rise of tourist are seen on year 2018 and above, particularly on year 2020 in which the number of tourist have doubled up.

Thailand also presents growth over the years. More tourist have visited the country in year 2020. Vietnam, however, shows slow progress in terms of their tourism. They have the lowest rate of international tourists among the 3. For the past 10 years, the graph shows a slow increase among international visitor in their country. Almost 15 lower than Japan.

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shows: 5

international: 4

japan: 4

tourist: 4

graph: 3

above: 3

tourists: 3

among: 3

years: 3

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Task Response

The report identifies the main trends but lacks specific data to support the observations. To improve, include specific figures to illustrate the trends and make more detailed comparisons between the countries. Also, ensure a clear overall summary is provided. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report demonstrates some organization, but the progression of ideas could be smoother. Transitions between sentences and paragraphs are sometimes abrupt, affecting the overall flow. For instance, the shift from the general overview to specific details about Japan could be more seamless. Consider using cohesive devices to link ideas more effectively and improve the logical sequencing of information.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is generally adequate for the task, but there's room for improvement in terms of variety and precision. Some phrases are repetitive (e.g., 'shows an increasing amount,' 'shows slow progress'). Try to incorporate a wider range of synonyms and more specific vocabulary to describe trends and comparisons. For example, instead of 'shows an increasing amount,' you could use 'experienced a surge' or 'witnessed a steady climb.' Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains grammatical errors that affect clarity. There are issues with subject-verb agreement ('Japan tourists shows'), article usage ('the graph above'), and sentence structure. While the overall meaning is understandable, these errors detract from the report's professionalism. Focus on proofreading carefully to identify and correct grammatical mistakes. Vary your sentence structures to enhance readability and demonstrate a wider range of grammatical control.

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