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Band 5+: The line graph below shows the number of visitors to three different museums in a city from 2010 to 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image features a line graph with a vertical y-axis labeled "Number of visitors" ranging from 0 to 140,000 in increments of 20,000 (0, 20,000, 40,000, 60,000, 80,000, 100,000, 120,000, 140,000) and a horizontal x-axis labeled with years from 2010 to 2020 (2010, 2012, 2014, 2016, 2018, 2020). A legend indicates three lines: Museum A, Museum B, and Museum C. For Museum A, the values are approximately 74,000 in 2010, 84,000 in 2012, 100,000 in 2014, 93,000 in 2016, 114,000 in 2018, and 130,000 in 2020. For Museum B, the values are approximately 48,000 in 2010, 54,000 in 2012, 63,000 in 2014, 86,000 in 2016, 93,000 in 2018, and 100,000 in 2020. For Museum C, the values are approximately 24,000 in 2010, 29,000 in 2012, 39,000 in 2014, 44,000 in 2016, 49,000 in 2018, and 60,000 in 2020.

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The graph illustrate the number of people who visit three different museums in a city between 2010 and 2020.

Overall, the museum A has almost frequently growth, whereas the museum B is less volatile, however the museum C remained fairly stable.

In 2010, the category A stood at 68 000visitors and it started constantly increasing till 2014.The number of visitors accorded 100 000, but this decline continues in 2 years. After that, in 2016, the numbers were rended highest to 120 000. While in 2010, the category B made up 45 000, and this museum always rose, but in 2014, it had sharp rise till 2016. Finally, this category reached 100 000 visitors during 10 years .In general the two trends began to converge then diverge.

Besides, in 2010, the category C started with 20 000. The number of individuals visiting this museum has slowly but constantly growth.Then it ended lowest indicator among three groups , which accorded to 60 000 in 2020.

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The report addresses the task by describing the general trends of the three museums over the period. It provides an overview and some specific data points, which is appropriate. However, there are several inaccuracies in the data (e.g., Museum A starting at 68,000 instead of 74,000, and the description of the trend for Museum A is inconsistent). Additionally, some phrases are unclear or grammatically incorrect, which affects clarity. To improve, ensure that all data points are accurately reported and that the description of trends is logical and coherent. Also, use precise language to describe changes (e.g., 'increased steadily', 'peaked', 'fluctuated') and avoid vague or incorrect expressions.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a clear overall structure with an introduction, an overview, and paragraphs for each museum. However, the flow is sometimes disrupted by awkward phrasing and unclear references (e.g., 'this decline continues in 2 years' and 'the two trends began to converge then diverge'). The use of cohesive devices is limited and sometimes inaccurate, making the message harder to follow. To improve, use clearer topic sentences and ensure each paragraph focuses on a single main idea, with logical sequencing of information. Also, use a range of linking words and referencing to connect ideas smoothly.

Lexical Resource

The report uses some appropriate vocabulary for describing trends (e.g., 'constantly increasing', 'sharp rise', 'slowly but constantly growth'), but there are several word choice and collocation errors (e.g., 'almost frequently growth', 'rended highest', 'accorded'). The range of vocabulary is limited, and some expressions are informal or inaccurate. To improve, expand your range of synonyms for describing changes (e.g., 'fluctuate', 'peak', 'plateau', 'decline') and ensure correct word forms and collocations. Practice using precise and natural language to describe data. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including subject-verb agreement ('The graph illustrate'), incorrect verb forms ('has almost frequently growth', 'rended highest'), and awkward sentence structures. Punctuation is also problematic, with missing commas and run-on sentences. These errors significantly affect clarity and accuracy. To improve, focus on mastering basic sentence structures, subject-verb agreement, and verb tenses. Review the use of articles and prepositions. Practice writing clear, grammatically correct sentences, and proofread your work to eliminate errors.

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