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Band 7+: The line graph below shows the percentage of people who used five different communication methods between 1998 and 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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The image illustrates a line graph where in 1998, Landline service is at 15%, Cellular phone service at 5%, Internet service at 2%, Fixed broadband at 0%, and Mobile broadband at 0%; by 2000, Landline is at 17%, Cellular at 10%, Internet at 3%, Fixed at 0.5%, Mobile at 0%; in 2002, Landline is 15%, Cellular at 15%, Internet at 4%, Fixed at 1%, Mobile at 0%; in 2004, Landline is 13%, Cellular at 25%, Internet at 8%, Fixed at 2%, Mobile at 0%; in 2006, Landline is 12%, Cellular at 40%, Internet at 10%, Fixed at 4%, Mobile at 0.5%; in 2008, Landline is 11%, Cellular at 60%, Internet at 12%, Fixed at 6%, Mobile at 1%.

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The line graph illustrates the proportion of users of five distinct communication methods from 1998 to 2008

Overall, most categories showed upward trends, except for landline service, which decreased over the survey. Additionally, cellular phone service continued to increase steadily and became the most common method.

In the first year, the percentage of people using landline service made up the highest share, followed by cellular phone and internet service, respectively. The figure for citizens accessing cellular phone service overtook landline service at around 15% and continued to increase, while that of internet service rose by 2% from 1998 to 2000. The proportion of people using cellular service reached its highest point in the last year, whereas the percentage of people using internet service also passed that of landline service to reach the second-highest point, consisted of under 20%.

In 2002, fixed broadband was published before growing in the figure from only 0% to approximately 6% in 2008. Similarly, the proportion of people using mobile broadband also increased, but it rose more considerably than that of fixed broadband.

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service: 10

landline: 4

cellular: 4

people: 4

using: 4

proportion: 3

phone: 3

internet: 3

broadband: 3

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Task Response

The report effectively summarizes the main trends, such as the overall increase in most methods and the decline of landline service. It makes relevant comparisons, like the overtaking of landline by cellular service. However, there are some inaccuracies and omissions, such as stating that internet service passed landline to become the second-highest (it remained lower than landline in 2008 according to the data) and not fully describing all data points for each year. To improve, ensure all key features are accurately reported and avoid minor factual errors. The report meets the word count and is well-structured.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is logically organized with a clear introduction, overview, and body paragraphs. The use of cohesive devices such as 'Overall', 'Additionally', and 'Similarly' helps the reader follow the progression. However, some transitions between ideas could be smoother, and the final paragraph could be better linked to the preceding discussion. The paragraphing is generally effective, but the second paragraph is quite dense and could be split for better clarity.

Lexical Resource

The report demonstrates a good range of vocabulary appropriate for the task, including terms like 'proportion', 'overtook', 'steadily', and 'reached its highest point'. There is some attempt at paraphrasing and using synonyms. However, there are a few awkward or less precise phrases, such as 'citizens accessing cellular phone service' and 'consisted of under 20%', which could be expressed more naturally. Overall, the lexical resource is adequate but not fully flexible or sophisticated. Pay attention to vocabulary repetition to improve the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report uses a variety of sentence structures, including complex sentences, and generally maintains good grammatical control. There are minor errors, such as 'consisted of' (should be 'consisting of' or 'at') and 'was published' (should be 'was introduced'), which slightly affect clarity. Punctuation is mostly correct, but a few sentences are long and could be broken down for better readability. Overall, the grammar is accurate enough to convey the message clearly, but there is room for improvement in precision and range.

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