correct this ielts writing task 1:
The given line graph illustrates the percentage of UK radio and television audiences throught the day, between october and december 1992.
Overall, throughout the day there were more people watching television than listening to radio. In the morning people were more likely to listen to radio, whereas in the afternoon and during night-hours people preferred watching television. From 1 am to 5 am the majority of the UK population slept.
Regarding the radio audience, at a first glance it is possible to say that starting from 6 am the amount of people listening to radio increased, reaching its peak (25%) at 8:30 am. From 9 am to midnight the number of listeners gradually decreased, respectively from 23% to 5%.
On the other hand, only the 7% of the UK population was used to watch television in the early-morning, then starting from 11 am it increased until reaching a stable audience (around 15%) between 1 pm and 3 pm. From 4 pm to 9 pm the television audience climbed up to above 45% and then dramatically decreased by 30% at midnight.
