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Band 5+: The line graph below shows the total number of births and deaths in a European country from 1950 to 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image contains a line graph with a vertical axis from 0 to 1,200,000 and a horizontal axis spanning the years 1950, 1970, 1990, 2010, 2030, and 2050, tracking two metrics: Birth Rate and Death Rate. The approximate data points for Birth Rate are: in 1950, 970,000; in 1970, 1,100,000; in 1990, 680,000; in 2010, 900,000; in 2030, 900,000; and in 2050, 900,000. The approximate data points for Death Rate are: in 1950, 900,000; in 1970, 920,000; in 1990, 880,000; in 2010, 900,000; in 2030, 880,000; and in 2050, 1,000,000.

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The given diagram delineates the total quanity of births and deaths in a European country between 1950 and 2050.

Overall, the amount of birth rate sharply fluctuate between 1950 and 2010 while death rate are stable in the same period. Moreover, after 2010, the number of birth rate has been become stable although death rate have moderate growth.

Between 1950 and 2010, birth rate recognises dramactical fluctuation and it reaches the peak at 1100000 in 1970 and hits the lowest at approximately 700000 in 1990. After varied period, the quanity of birth rate flattened at arond 900000 in fourty years.

Turning to the number of death rate, it have a opposite trend with nirth rate. According to the prescribed data,the death rate stood at around 900000 between 1950 and 2030. In the next 20 years, the death rate has been moderately grown from 900000 to the highest point 1000000 in 2050.

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death: 5

birth: 4

between: 3

900000: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the task by describing the main trends in births and deaths, and makes some comparisons. However, there are several inaccuracies and omissions. For instance, the birth rate is described as fluctuating sharply, but the data shows a rise, fall, and then stabilization; the death rate is said to be stable until 2030, but it actually fluctuates slightly. Additionally, the report omits the specific values for some years and contains minor data errors (e.g., birth rate in 1990 is given as approximately 700,000 instead of 680,000). The language is sometimes unclear or contains errors (e.g., 'quanity', 'dramactical', 'flattened at arond'), which affect clarity. To improve, ensure accurate data reporting, use precise vocabulary, and proofread for grammatical and spelling errors.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a clear overall structure with an introduction, an overview, and two body paragraphs. However, the flow is disrupted by frequent grammatical errors and awkward phrasing, which make the message harder to follow. The use of cohesive devices is limited and sometimes inaccurate (e.g., 'Moreover', 'Turning to'), and the paragraphing could be more effectively managed to separate the trends for births and deaths more clearly. To improve, focus on using a wider range of linking words and ensure each paragraph has a clear central topic.

Lexical Resource

The report uses some appropriate vocabulary for describing trends (e.g., 'fluctuate', 'reach the peak', 'hits the lowest', 'flattened', 'moderate growth'). However, there are several spelling errors (e.g., 'quanity', 'dramactical', 'arond', 'fourty', 'nirth') and some awkward or inaccurate word choices (e.g., 'recognises', 'prescribed data'). The range of vocabulary is limited, and the report would benefit from more precise and varied terms to describe changes and comparisons. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors that significantly affect clarity and accuracy. These include subject-verb agreement issues (e.g., 'death rate are', 'it have'), incorrect verb forms (e.g., 'has been become', 'has been moderately grown'), and misuse of articles and prepositions. The sentence structures are often simple and repetitive, and there are frequent punctuation and spelling mistakes. To improve, the writer should focus on mastering basic grammar rules, using a wider range of sentence structures, and proofreading carefully to eliminate errors.

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