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Band 7+: The line graph illustrate thefts per 1000 vehicles in the four different countries over the 9 years.

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The image contains a line graph titled "Comparison of car theft" showing car theft rates from 1990-1999 for Great Britain, Sweden, France, and Canada. Data points: Great Britain fluctuates between 20-23 thefts per 1,000 vehicles from 1990 to 1999, Sweden increases from about 5 to 12 thefts, France stays around 7-9 thefts, and Canada increases from roughly 6 to just under 10 thefts. The graph's horizontal axis lists years from 1990 to 1999, and the vertical axis marks thefts per 1,000 vehicles in increments of 5 starting from 0 up to 25.

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The line chart shows car thefts per 1000 vehicles in 4 countries-Great Britain, Sweden, France, and Canada–over a span of 9 years.

Overall, while Sweden experienced an upward trend during the period, other countries showed steadiness. At the end, Great Britain stayed with an enormous gap comparatively to remainings.

In 1990, Great Britain was at the absolute top, roughly at 17 thefts per 1000car. Throughout the period, it slightly fluctuated with local peaks and nadirs and finished at the almost initial value.

The different trajectory was followed by Sweden, starting at 8; that is, during the timeline it witnessed a gradual rise to approximately 14 in 1999, ending the period as the second highest among the four lines.

In contrast to Sweden’s growth, Canada and France were stable with 7 and 6 thefts per 1000 vehicles, respectively. Canada started its path with a downward pattern; afterward, it stabilized at 6 over a period 9 years. France at the beginning climbed from 6 to 8, subsequently, this figure dropped gradually to the same level as Canada.

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period: 4

thefts: 3

britain: 3

sweden: 3

france: 3

canada: 3

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Task Response

The report appropriately addresses the task by describing the main trends and comparing the four countries. The overall structure is clear, with an introduction, an overview, and detailed paragraphs. However, there are some inaccuracies in the data (e.g., starting values for Great Britain and Sweden, and the final values for Sweden and Canada) and a few omissions (e.g., the exact fluctuations for Great Britain and the final values for France and Canada). To improve, ensure that all key data points are accurately reported and that the overview clearly highlights the most significant trends. Additionally, pay attention to grammatical accuracy and word choice (e.g., 'per 1000car' should be 'per 1000 cars', and 'remainings' should be 'the remaining countries').

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is generally well-organized with a clear introduction, overview, and body paragraphs. The progression from the overall trend to specific country details is logical. However, some sentences are awkwardly phrased, which slightly affects the flow. For example, 'At the end, Great Britain stayed with an enormous gap comparatively to remainings' is unclear and disrupts coherence. Additionally, the final sentence about France is a bit convoluted. To improve, ensure each paragraph has a clear topic sentence and that transitions between ideas are smooth. Also, avoid vague references like 'remainings' and clarify comparisons.

Lexical Resource

The report uses a good range of vocabulary appropriate for the task, such as 'upward trend', 'fluctuated', 'local peaks and nadirs', and 'gradual rise'. There is evidence of flexibility in word choice. However, there are some inaccuracies and awkward expressions, e.g., 'enormous gap comparatively to remainings' and 'the different trajectory was followed by Sweden'. These phrases are not natural and could be rephrased for clarity. To improve, use more precise and idiomatic language, and ensure that comparisons are expressed clearly. For instance, instead of 'enormous gap', say 'a significant difference' or 'much higher than the other countries'.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates a good range of grammatical structures, including complex sentences and appropriate use of tenses. However, there are several errors and awkward phrasings that detract from accuracy. For example, 'thefts per 1000car' should be 'thefts per 1,000 cars', 'over a period 9 years' should be 'over a period of 9 years', and 'the different trajectory was followed by Sweden' is awkward. Additionally, the sentence 'France at the beginning climbed from 6 to 8, subsequently, this figure dropped gradually to the same level as Canada' has a comma splice. To improve, proofread for minor errors and ensure that sentences are grammatically correct and clearly structured.

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