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Band 4+: The line graph shows the average number of weekly patients visiting four clinics of a hospital from 2010 to 2016. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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The image contains a line graph titled "Number of patients to four clinics in one hospital," tracking patient visits from 2010 to 2016 for Birth Control, Eye, Diabetic, and Dental clinics; Birth Control steadily rose from around 50 to almost 200 patients, Eye fluctuated starting at around 180 rising to 360 then dropping to 300, Diabetic started just over 120, peaked at nearly 350 before falling below 300, and Dental began over 80, rising sharply to almost 400 then falling steadily to just over 350.

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The graph shows information about how many patients visited four clinics of hospital every week between 2010 and 2016.

Overall, all categories increased, except for birth control, which sow a slight fall.

Starting with fluctuating trends, the clinic eye was the leader with a little more than 100 in 2010. It then experienced a significant increase, reaching 350 patients by the end of the period. Similarly, dental clinic also vacillate considerably. Despite starting at 100 patients, it experienced a dramatic fall 50 patients before grew just over 100 patients in 2014. If you look at increase mildly in the early parts of the period before remaining stable for the next two years. After that, the figure rose dramatically to just over 150 patients.

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Regarding the birth control clinic, it initially recorded the highest number of patients, standing at approximately 240 patients. It then rose to about 280 before dropping sharply to 180. Finally number recovered to around 240 in 2016.

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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

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clinic: 3

before: 3

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Task Response

The report attempts to address the task by describing trends for the clinics, but it contains significant inaccuracies and irrelevant information. The overall statement is incorrect (birth control is said to fall, but it actually rose). Key data points are misrepresented (e.g., eye clinic starting at 'a little more than 100' instead of around 180, birth control starting at 240 instead of 50). The description of the dental clinic is confusing and includes an unrelated phrase ('вский (США)'). The report also omits the diabetic clinic entirely. To improve, focus on accurately selecting and reporting the main features from the visual description, making clear comparisons, and ensuring all clinics are covered. Avoid including irrelevant text and double-check data trends.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a basic structure with an introduction and an overall trend statement, but the organization of information is somewhat confusing. The description of the 'Eye' and 'Dental' clinics is mixed together, and the paragraphing is not effectively managed. The use of cohesive devices is limited and sometimes unclear (e.g., 'If you look at increase mildly...'). To improve, use clear topic sentences for each paragraph and ensure each paragraph focuses on a specific clinic or comparison. Use a range of linking words (e.g., 'in contrast', 'similarly', 'while') to guide the reader smoothly.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is limited and repetitive, with some inappropriate word choices (e.g., 'sow a slight fall' should be 'showed a slight fall', 'vacillate' is not commonly used in this context). There is an attempt to use some descriptive language (e.g., 'significant increase', 'dramatic fall'), but overall the range is narrow. To improve, learn more precise and varied vocabulary for describing trends (e.g., 'plummeted', 'soared', 'fluctuated', 'plateaued') and ensure correct word forms and collocations.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors and awkward phrasing that affect clarity (e.g., 'the clinic eye was the leader', 'it experienced a dramatic fall 50 patients before grew', 'If you look at increase mildly'). There is also a mix of tenses and incomplete sentences. To improve, practice using a variety of sentence structures (simple, compound, complex) correctly. Pay attention to subject-verb agreement, article usage, and verb forms. Proofread carefully to eliminate errors.

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